Saturday, January 28, 2012

Crimson

mountain crevices      
under curtain of water,
crimson with secrets 


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fireworks in the sky 
crimson dust twirling, falling  
peacock feathers bright


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crimson sun fading
behind blue tinge waterfalls,
dust to dust we fall  







Posted for Haiku Heights - Prompt is crimson
and Haiku My Heart


We are currently staying overnight in Hilton Niagara Falls Hotel.   Our room has a fantastic view of Niagara Falls.   

27 comments:

  1. All the haikus are wonderful but the first one with the C alliteration is my favorite because it speaks to me personally.

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  2. Great meaning to these. Enjoyed them.

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  3. My first time here I think. I love your words with the use of crimson. I especially like the last haiku. Dust to dust, yes.
    I read your profile. Good for you to be expressing what you want to. If time permits, I'll wander this way again.

    Peace

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  4. Great set of haiku. Great write!

    Hank

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  5. All three of these are wonderful! Great use of the prompt.

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  6. The name of your blog expresses your 'eye':) These poems are a perfect example of your beautiful gift!

    I was at the Hilton Falls View a few years ago! We didn't sleep much that night:) Too much to watch!

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  7. gorgeous writing, crimson with secrets, my fav line

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  8. A haiku set with such hope, sure wouldn't bring one to the end of their rope, unless it was the good end of course..haha

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  9. Beautiful haiku, inspired by the falls?

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  10. That last one, profound, I felt. I saw our life's light as the fading crimson sun behind blue eyes... Wonderful!

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  11. water crimson with secrets...what a image...and symbolism that goes along with it grace...all are nice but that first one def sticks to me...

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  12. All of them are beautifully penned. And the last one, I liked the most. 'Dust to dust we fall'..Gorgeous line.

    :)

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  13. Great Haikus, loved the first best. Paintings are great too.

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  14. welcome to haiku my heart.
    forgive my late arrival...as i struggle the rough terrain of physical challenges.
    your beauty is a certain grace,
    you have generously blessed me with both.

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  15. This is just beautiful, Grace.

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  16. Oh, Niagara Falls. You lucky!!!!!The poem is lovely. I love "dust to dust we fall".

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  17. These are all lovely but I especially liked the first one. I have been to Niagra Falls and your Haiku spoke it well!

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  18. wowwwwww...........wonderful set of haiku....loved it...............makes lot of inner senses .......

    here is mine

    http://thealchemycritics.blogspot.com/2012/01/lifes-simple-realities-crimson.html

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  19. Awesome haiku Grace. I loved reading them, but I especially enjoyed the last one. Well done.
    Thank you for sharing.

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  20. I shall seek the secrets of the mountain crevices...


    Boy in Crimson

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  21. Crimson with secrets

    Nicely done, Grace!!

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