Friday, January 20, 2012

Tiptoe

orchestra waltzing
white belles tiptoe and dance, 
snowflakes whirling mad  






~0~0

the clock hand tiptoes
one minute before midnight ,
moonrise by the sea 

~0~0

snow threw a tantrum  
loud thunder and crashing sounds,
i held my tea cup  






Posted for Haiku Heights:   Prompt is Tiptoe
and Haiku My Heart


Poetry form:   Haiku and senryu forms -  3 lines of 17 syllables.
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22 comments:

  1. Pat HattJanuary 20, 2012 at 11:05 PM

    Tiptoed through and a great haiku or two or three by you..haha

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  2. Susie ClevengerJanuary 21, 2012 at 1:41 AM

    These are beautiful haiku...You created such beautiful art with your words.

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  3. sushJanuary 21, 2012 at 3:20 AM

    I tiptoed into this beautiful blog today
    cheers
    Sush

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  4. anthonynorthJanuary 21, 2012 at 3:44 AM

    Enjoyed them all but the one to accompany the pic was best, I think.

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  5. UnknownJanuary 21, 2012 at 6:54 AM

    beautiful loved the movement in the picture too thank you x

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  6. kaykualaJanuary 21, 2012 at 8:22 AM

    Beautiful haiku tiptoeing in all three instances.

    Hank

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  7. Brian MillerJanuary 21, 2012 at 9:00 AM

    nice haiku....i like the snow as dancers for sure...had a night of snow and sleet last night here...

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  8. carol l mckennaJanuary 21, 2012 at 9:27 AM

    lovely photo and dancing haiku ~namaste, carol (A Creative Harbor) linked w/HMH

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  9. ChèvrefeuilleJanuary 21, 2012 at 10:03 AM

    Love these verses on the prompt tiptoe. The picture at the first is very lovely and makes the haiku stronger.

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  10. TeresaJanuary 21, 2012 at 11:28 AM

    You've really set the standard high. I absolutely love the first one.

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  11. AnonymousJanuary 21, 2012 at 11:41 AM

    applause for the last one.Super stylization. :)

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  12. Magical Mystical TeacherJanuary 21, 2012 at 1:15 PM

    I could use a little moonrise by the sea right now. I like that image!

    Shadowy Path

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  13. AnonymousJanuary 21, 2012 at 2:10 PM

    I cannot stop thinking of Tiny Tim.

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  14. wheatgermJanuary 21, 2012 at 5:53 PM

    thundersnow

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  15. Judith WesterfieldJanuary 21, 2012 at 9:12 PM

    "The clock hand tiptoes"
    Fantastic line. My ultimate compliment: wish I had thought of it.

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  16. justjoeJanuary 21, 2012 at 11:19 PM

    What an artful blog.
    I shall comment in haiku.
    I will follow you!

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  17. ShaunaJanuary 22, 2012 at 6:17 PM

    gorgeous dance haiku and picture.

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  18. ChristineJanuary 22, 2012 at 6:51 PM

    beautiful

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  19. rebeccaJanuary 24, 2012 at 9:49 AM

    your grace and love of words paints my heart like a new morning.
    so glad to find you here. hoping for your beauty every haiku my heart friday.

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  20. MyWordsWhisperJanuary 25, 2012 at 12:11 AM

    This Haiku is lovely!

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  21. becca givensJanuary 26, 2012 at 1:21 AM

    Oh my ... I cannot decide my favorite between the first and the last. Great set!!

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  22. Magical Mystical TeacherJanuary 27, 2012 at 8:12 AM

    Dancing belles as snowflakes--sweet!


    Tiptoe Haikus

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