dawn is a chimera
mixing the star lights
with birthing hour of light
quick is the rising mist -
blurring of sapphire, glint of topaz stones,
fragment of powdery clouds, shimmer of moth-wings
here is the moment:
teardrop lingers in moon's eye
lash
frozen in frame
as giant wave
curling
cresting before crashing
into field of cornflowers
milk-spilled sky mingles with
dandelion-wrinkled rain-
I'm wrapped in drifting leaves
as i drive into city's white noise
serene as lake
Vetheuil In The Fog
Posted for D'verse Poets Pub - Impressionism hosted by Bjorn Rudberg ~ Join us when the pub opens at 3pm EST ~ Thanks for the visit ~
Caught all around as beyond the city is found.
ReplyDeleteThis was like diving into the painting. Love how it's both a sea and a field... blue is wonderful.
ReplyDeleteOh how I liked this poem. You had me at "dawn is a chimera"...I love the shades of blue in this, the illusions of fog and sea...And when I scrolled to the end and saw the painting you had chosen, it was perfection.
ReplyDeleteI love those blue impressions, Grace, the way you mixed 'the star lights
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and the moment:
teardrop lingers in moon's eye
lash
frozen in frame'!
This was an ace expression, pure perfection as per the painting; poem for the ages; with divers gushes & atoms accolades. I adored the whole thing, but liked the lines /milk-spilled sky mingles with/dandelion-wrinkled rain/.
ReplyDeleteNice description from colorful dawn to serene white noise in the morning drive to the city.
ReplyDeleteI love that first line! You have truly "painted us a beatiful scene.
ReplyDeleteGood choice of images that mingle and blur with the early morning mist.
ReplyDeleteSuch lovely imagery, from dawn to dusk. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteI love the shimmer of moth wings, Grace, and 'dandelion-wrinkled rain'. Blue is such a soothing color.
ReplyDeleteGreat images and wonderful how you lead us into sea crash into the cornflower field :)
ReplyDeleteWe both turned to dawn and, oh, how I love your descriptions--your colors are so alive. I'm tempted to rewrite mine...down the road, anyway.
ReplyDeleteFabulous impressionism, Grace! I love the blue hues but would prefer a canoe to the car on such a morning :)
ReplyDeletereally beautiful images you create in my mind as I read this Grace. Love the blue as backdrop against our words and thoughts. Like walking through the paints and feeling every brush stroke.
ReplyDeletesuch light and color here....truly impressionistic. Lovely, Grace. Jane
ReplyDeleteThank you for painting this magic moment in mind
ReplyDeleteBeautifully woven words...it left a wonderful impression
ReplyDeleteYou are a master painter of language and this dive into the depths of blue was like a dream. I especially liked, "cresting before crashing
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"milk-spilled sky mingles with
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yummy words together!
feels like a lonely ride. great write :)
ReplyDeleteoh this is soooooo beautiful. the phrases are sooo breathtaking!
ReplyDeleteI'm wrapped in drifting leaves
ReplyDeleteas i drive into city's white noise
serene as lake
Beautifully wrapped up all nicely in an undisturbed lake!
Hank
Truly an impressionistic poem...so full of nuance.
ReplyDeleteI'm wrapped in drifting leaves... I love it.
ReplyDeleteI was excited to read your poem for this prompt, Grace. Your words created a masterpiece before my eyes. Oh how I love "shimmer of moth wings".
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and very descriptive. :-) Happy weekend, Grace. :-)
ReplyDeleteThe line "dawn is a chimera" is awesome! In fact, your poem is stunning with all of the images you painted, Grace! Hugs!
ReplyDeleteI love this. Fantastic writing.
ReplyDeleteApplause to this amazing writing. You're great!
ReplyDeleteEvocative - wonderful imagery - you have painted the scene superbly.
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