Friday, September 9, 2011

Blue Moon

the world turned blue
when pining words in letter
returned:   unknown address




full blue moon rising
over colored freckled clouds
portent of magic




Posted for Haiku Heights - Challenge.   Prompt # 67 is Yearn and Prompt # 68 is Magic.
Also for:  In Tandem 

Picture credit:  Jinksy

12 comments:

  1. Sad the first one!! The second a future significant and hope it is only once in a blue moon if the magic is dark!!
    The art work is very eye-catching!!

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  2. heartfelt and sad, the first one. can feel the yearning..

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  3. Love these haikus exploring the contrasting faces of blue! Beautiful!

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  4. Feelings of regret and frustration for the 1st. A brilliant twist for the 2nd

    Hank

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  5. Unknown address! You've got yearning down to a tee, this really hurts!

    Love the magic of the full blue moon rising!

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  6. lovely lines...nicely crafted words!

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  7. I could feel the hurt here...Very touching...

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  8. Very touching poem. Very well written. I loved it!

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  9. blue world and freckled clouds...so creative...great work!

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  10. I love that first one; so unexpectedly sad.

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