sun stood poised on clouds
rays of splendour on her cloak
ready for new day
the tree stood erect
greeting the bright morning sun
leaves, branches hushed still
picture credit: http://lori-rocks.tumblr.com/post/9414136976
"Everyday in every way I’m getting better and better" - Emile Coue
gorgeous words and photo...I was going to pick a favorite phrase in each, but I love every word of both haikus
ReplyDeleteQuite lovely words and picture!
ReplyDeletethose first two lines just grab, nice one
ReplyDeletePleasant post..thank you.
ReplyDelete☮ Siggi in Downeast Maine
So much grace and poise seen here in the picture and words!!
ReplyDeleteI like the sense of tension and energy in your haiku, and the description of the sun in the sky is lovely. I hope they got together secretly, as soon as it went dark.
ReplyDeleteGorgeous. The best time of day.
ReplyDeleteWonderful picture, cool words!
ReplyDeleteYes, on to a new day. Great pics!
ReplyDeleteHank
Lovely haiku and beautiful picture!!
ReplyDeleteLovely words.
ReplyDeleteI loved that line 'sun stood poised on clouds' - just great.
Beautiful words! In Mid Oct. I scheduled a post of a painting I did a few years ago that i had called Daybreak. So, hope you come to my corner to look at it
ReplyDeleteI'm waiting for that poised sun to start dancing!
ReplyDeletePoised and poise
Stunning visual through your words ~~
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