Thursday, September 22, 2011

Boat ride



boat coasting over 
blue water shimmering sky
rippling quiet day



daybreak horizon
preparing to sail away
to waters unknown




Posted for In Tandem # 11 and Haiku Heights - prompt is water.


Picture credit:   Jinksy 
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13 comments:

  1. SarasSeptember 22, 2011 at 8:45 PM

    Sea journeys are quite amazing and exciting indeed albeit a little long!

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  2. Ann GrenierSeptember 22, 2011 at 9:55 PM

    Coasting, shimmering, rippling ... I'm floating along in your lovely Haiku.

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  3. Susie ClevengerSeptember 22, 2011 at 10:38 PM

    I like your kind of day!

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  4. NankaSeptember 23, 2011 at 1:54 AM

    Took me the Jack Sparrow way :) reading the last line!!

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  5. LSHSeptember 23, 2011 at 2:43 AM

    i would love to be on that boat! sailing away somewhere new!
    lovely, thoughtful haiku :)

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  6. JinksySeptember 23, 2011 at 2:58 AM

    How well you daybreak dawned for my night boat! Lovely haiku...

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  7. AnonymousSeptember 23, 2011 at 5:47 AM

    Beautiful words.
    Made me yearn for still waters and a gentle boat trip.

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  8. kaykualaSeptember 23, 2011 at 8:33 AM

    A boat ride can be tantalizing. It would be fun! Nice write!

    Hank

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  9. Andy SewinaSeptember 23, 2011 at 9:15 AM

    Waters unknown, does it for me!

    Nicely!

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  10. nicolewianSeptember 23, 2011 at 4:47 PM

    I want to sail away....

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  11. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 23, 2011 at 8:56 PM

    I'm ready for an adventure. Some unknown waters would suit me just fine right now!



    My Watery Haiku

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  12. laurie kolpSeptember 24, 2011 at 1:37 PM

    Grace~ Beautiful haiku... you incorporated Jinksy's picture into the water prompt with seeming ease.

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  13. MargaretSeptember 26, 2011 at 1:46 PM

    I really like the last two lines. It's what boating should be all about.

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