Wednesday, September 28, 2011

Water



cadence of water
rushing in, rushing out, rush
morning, evening tide




rhythm of water
waving in, waving out, wave
sun rise to sun set 




Haiku Heights:   Prompt # 87 is Rhythm   


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10 comments:

  1. ChristineSeptember 28, 2011 at 10:03 PM

    perfect rhythm in these words, very calming

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  2. Susie ClevengerSeptember 28, 2011 at 11:00 PM

    I feel and hear the water...a chance for inner peace

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  3. NankaSeptember 28, 2011 at 11:54 PM

    The rhythm of the seas, well captured!!

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  4. Laura MariaSeptember 29, 2011 at 12:02 AM

    This conjured up images of long, calming walks by the sea. Excellent work!

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  5. Ramesh SoodSeptember 29, 2011 at 7:36 AM

    Wow, waving in rhythm.. what a sight..to cherish.. thanks..

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  6. AnonymousSeptember 29, 2011 at 9:15 AM

    perfect rhythm :)

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  7. Andy SewinaSeptember 29, 2011 at 10:23 AM

    I can hear the rhythm here!

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  8. kaykualaSeptember 29, 2011 at 11:22 AM

    Coming and going...I can see a lot of movements. The water is alive when standing by the sea seeing the waves lapping the shore. Beautiful haiku!

    Hank

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  9. AnonymousSeptember 29, 2011 at 12:30 PM

    These rhythms are calming ... I love to listen to the ebb and flow!!

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  10. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 29, 2011 at 9:23 PM

    I find the rhythm (or cadence) of water refreshing to my soul...


    Rhythms here and here

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