slight smoke hangs in the air
the sky swallows
its blue, spits out grey
i water the pots of zinnias -
scorched leaves,
delicate buds - pinks, reds, oranges -
their thirst no different
from my own
my back strains with the effort
soon I can move only
gingerly
so this is what it means
to grow old:
the body keeping time
in careful steps,
while the heart
still leans toward summer
my spine pulls taut,
an osteoporosis warning
still, I lift my chest
summer has returned -
heat, humidity, fires in the sky
i stand
a maple tree
filled with orange-lit fog,
Toss in the wind—rack up the muttering sky.*
i root myself
i hold my body high
grateful
for another season
of long, hot days—
for sunlight still warming
my shoulders,
for flowers
that insist on blooming
for whatever time remains -
to stand
to weather
to live
*A Thunderstorm by Archibald Lampman
Posted for dVerse Poets Pub - OpenLinkNight #411- Hosted by Mish. Thanks for your visits and comments. Happy 15h year anniversary dVerse!!!!
To grow old and still have nature, that is what counts, and the seasons... i could really feel that heat of summer (we have a few very hot days at the moment)
ReplyDeleteSo moving, Grace. A beautiful expression of hope, gratitude and resistance!
ReplyDeleteWonderful lines here: the sky swallows - its blue, spits out grey…and rack up the muttering sky!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem 💜
ReplyDelete~Maggie
I now the resilience of the zinnias continuing to flower and you straightening your back moving on
ReplyDeleteBravo
Much love
I love the determined will exhibited in this. the flowers and seasons give hope.
ReplyDeleteA great poem. Sorry to hear about all your smoke in the Northeast!
ReplyDeleteIt has been floating our way it seems.
I love this line...
so this is what it means
to grow old:
the body keeping time
in careful steps,
while the heart
still leans toward summer
Oh beautiful and I can very much relate to it My favourite "slight smoke hangs in the air, the sky swallows its blue, spits out grey"
ReplyDeleteOld age is to be expected and I sympathize, Grace, but that widespread smoke is something we didn't see coming in our youth and is a threat we didn't expect to be dealing with - stay safe...
ReplyDeleteYes as we grow older nature has a way of reminding us of our aches and pains. The sun warms our spirit and the stormy weather reminds us of our arthritis! Beautiful writing Grace. I can relate ☺️
ReplyDeleteWhile we age, the world around us ages towards something constantly younger, perhaps that in itself is something to stare at wonder. Well penned~
ReplyDelete"i root myself
ReplyDeletei hold my body high
grateful..."
To say this is growing old...with Grace! :)
What a beautiful and wise poem - wonderfully meditative and thoughtful - Jae
ReplyDeleteA beautiful picture drawn in words.
ReplyDeleteGreat Grace, having to go through the familiar routine just as before. It makes growing old to be more fulfilling. Love the common things mentioned here!
ReplyDeleteHank
I appreciate the honesty, hope and strength in your poem. Sending these lines back to you in appreciation.
ReplyDeletethe body keeping time
in careful steps,
while the heart
still leans toward summer
The last comment was from Ali - Flashlightbatteries.blog
ReplyDeleteWonderful poem. Love how you tied the weather with our bodies getting older. We are in a weather alert due to the smoke from your country's forest fires. We were advised to stay inside because of the bad air. I live in Wisconsin near Lake Michigan, and when I looked down the road, where a large section of trees stood tall. It's like they are standing in a fog. I cannot imagine being up close like you.
ReplyDeleteTake care... 1Manview
I like your poem better than his! Well done.
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