to think that
i could be
first fruit in Eve's garden
amidst star-struck magnolias
& green-eyed apples
i could be this-
seducing you with my
sun-yellow skin, my juicy velvet
nectar, my sticky cleft body
in your palm
i could make you
*hungry for the sun,*
make you forget
dark music, darker shadows,
the darkest night when the moon
is only a curved pin
but instead
i offer you a calm moment—
peeling back my skin
against your fingers,
dripping with sweat
i am cool hand,
settled wine glass, shaved ice,
slow slow dance
reminding you
beneath fuzz and dusty skin
is one hard stone pit
black earth
sand & silt
growing sweetness
honeyed by bees
scarred by wasps
Ooh, Grace, we both wrote about the Garden of Eden, you about Eve and I about Lilith! I love that you have written from the peach’s point of view, given it a peachy voice, and set it ‘amidst star-struck magnolias & green-eyed apples’. I especially love the lines:
ReplyDelete‘i could be this-
seducing you with my
sun-yellow skin, my juicy velvet
nectar, my sticky cleft body
in your palm’.
Grace this is an intoxicating poem just like how I find the aroma of peaches intoxicating! It has also reminded me that the finest peach pie I ever tasted was many years ago when I traveled to the States and met up with a fellow poet who I’d met here on dVerse.!
ReplyDeleteFrom the dirt and so returned 👍
ReplyDeleteSo sensuous, Grace, as peaches are
ReplyDelete"seducing you with my
sun-yellow skin, my juicy velvet
nectar, my sticky cleft body
in your palm"
Off to have a cold shower now...
What a wonderful poem.
ReplyDelete"honeyed by bees
scarred by wasps"
Both!
Ooh this is so beautiful and I never thought a peach could be so mischievous... I would like to go to this
ReplyDelete... Little Garden.
A beautiful poem, Grace. I love the senses you bring into the poem.
ReplyDeleteeric here. i do believe the act of eating is sacred, but it is never more obviously so than when peach is it.
ReplyDeleteSensuous imagery. You really make the peach stand out.
ReplyDeletei could be this-
ReplyDeleteseducing you with my
sun-yellow skin, my juicy velvet
nectar, my sticky cleft body
in your palm
Wonderful round up of the peach, Grace! I often wonder how they view us humans if they could speak!
Hank
Love the imagery and the sensual language, and the air of the forbidden ! Well done! JIM
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