Friday, November 22, 2013

Red

Red Beach in Panjin, China

 (Home to more than 236 types of birds)

I stand sea-
swarmed under mauve rose sky- 
white wings folded

Under black crowns
I crane towards autumn canvas
wet of morning

rain, cupped majestic
by crimson sun shimmering salty
grass ripe as cherries

Night beckons
Plumed bright of rubies & garnets
My skin quivers

Everything pulses vibrant
bold
red
the only color I know:
You 

Posted for Imaginary Garden for Real Toads - Hannah's Challenge
and Flash Fiction Friday - 55 red lettered words for the G-man ~  It's actually grey & cold here ~  Happy weekend to all ~  

picture credit:  Kirsten Wong
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31 comments:

  1. Kerry O'ConnorNovember 22, 2013 at 12:07 PM

    You have written this piece with the lightest touch, Grace. Such a gorgeous selection of words and interesting narrative viewpoint.

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  2. AnonymousNovember 22, 2013 at 12:15 PM

    Yes, you DO like your Friday Red, I see :). Happy weekend, Grace ~

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  3. AnonymousNovember 22, 2013 at 12:18 PM

    Oh, this is as beautiful as your picture. And just imagine, 236 types of birds!

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  4. Marcoantonio Arellano (Nene)November 22, 2013 at 12:27 PM

    beutifully described, as Kerry said... with the lightest touch..
    what is extraordinary about this picture in Panjin China is how it seems so distant
    and extricated from the pollution in other provinces especially in the urban areas

    gracias for this 'graceful' piece. Have a lovely weekend mi amiga

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  5. Vandana SharmaNovember 22, 2013 at 12:37 PM

    Lovely redness!!

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  6. TALONNovember 22, 2013 at 12:39 PM

    I so agree with Kerry - so light. But as vibrant and beautiful as that amazing beach. The colors warm me, Grace. This is gorgeous. We've had a little snow, but it's the dull skies that make me feel the chill. Wishing you a glorious weekend.

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  7. HannahNovember 22, 2013 at 12:45 PM

    Yes, such grace. As a nature lover you honed in on just what was striking for me as well. I love the way your words trail down and focus in on "You." Beautiful.

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  8. Sherry Blue SkyNovember 22, 2013 at 1:14 PM

    WOWZERS! You ROCKED this prompt! Gorgeous images and zinger of a closing line. Sigh. I am replete.

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  9. Sumana RoyNovember 22, 2013 at 1:38 PM

    so beautiful and gorgeous and what an ending.........

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  10. G-ManNovember 22, 2013 at 1:39 PM

    This whole post just POPPED!!!
    From the vibrant pic to your passionate text.
    Loved your Crimson 55
    Thanks for playing, thanks for your much appreciated support
    and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  11. ruthNovember 22, 2013 at 1:41 PM

    gorgeous write - vibrantly coloured

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  12. AnonymousNovember 22, 2013 at 1:51 PM

    That is such a beautiful write. A great flow and the words are true "gems". :-)
    -HA

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  13. Gloria BakerNovember 22, 2013 at 2:10 PM

    Beautiful Grace:)

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  14. Vanessa Victoria KilmerNovember 22, 2013 at 3:47 PM

    I can feel this tripping and vibrating across my skin.

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  15. MaryNovember 22, 2013 at 4:50 PM

    Oh, I like this. I like the pulsing of bold red, and the ending is exquisite!

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  16. author.nara.maloneNovember 22, 2013 at 5:23 PM

    So beautiful, especially love that third stanza.

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  17. ayalaNovember 22, 2013 at 6:42 PM

    Love this Grace!

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  18. revelationsNovember 22, 2013 at 7:29 PM

    that poem had a grace (very fitting) to it.. seductively musical with an ending that grabbed...

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  19. Brian MillerNovember 22, 2013 at 8:25 PM

    smiles...the only color you need to know...them....great close on this...i like the different hues of red you draw out in this as well grace...def like the nature touches as well...

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  20. Pat HattNovember 22, 2013 at 8:34 PM

    That is a read all should embrace at their feed

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  21. Alice AudreyNovember 22, 2013 at 9:35 PM

    You capture the mood of the picture very well.

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  22. Other MaryNovember 22, 2013 at 10:36 PM

    So lush and lovely...red is now my favorite!

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  23. Susie ClevengerNovember 22, 2013 at 11:11 PM

    Such a beautiful piece that gives a voice to the image

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  24. alan1704November 23, 2013 at 5:03 AM

    Brilliant , the journey to 'you' so much colour and so vibrant.

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  25. the walking manNovember 23, 2013 at 7:19 AM

    Grace you write poetry of beauty and wonder as well as any I have ever read. I dislike comparisons myself so I will not dishonor you with any, only say this has a lovely tone to it.

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  26. kaykualaNovember 23, 2013 at 10:08 AM

    Flaming red and of grand color hues. Beautifully written Grace and an equally grand ending.

    Hank

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  27. Kay L. DaviesNovember 23, 2013 at 3:31 PM

    I love the way you've used the words, Grace, not obviously but subtly taking something like "crane" from the bird and using it as a verb. So very well done.
    K

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  28. Siggi in Downeast MaineNovember 25, 2013 at 12:04 AM

    Well written and interesting. Thank You.
    Peace
    Siggi

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  29. WolfsrosebudDecember 3, 2013 at 8:36 AM

    this was bold... and I think I'm hungry now... all good I hope -- you haven't posted for awhile

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  30. Elsie AmataDecember 4, 2013 at 9:19 AM

    Wow! That picture is stunning and your words were beautiful. As always, thank you! Have a wonderful week!

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