Wednesday, June 12, 2013

Spring bloom

the way you swell:  
a fuller moon, a fragrant rose -
on my hands 



Picture credit:   Just a Picture


the way you tremble:
petalled pink, breathless wind, a dewdrop
on my lips



Posted for Poetry Jam:   Its All About Flowers
and Haiku Heights:  Ripple - It's been a while since I wrote haiku/senryu.  Smiles ~

40 comments:

  1. Beautiful, Gace... both of them!

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  2. mmm nice use of the senses in this grace...
    and nice subtle intimacy as well...
    that little tremble...oo la la..adds just the right touch...smiles.

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  3. So many levels here! Simply delightful haiku, tastefully illustrated.

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  4. Grace, your photos AND words are beautiful as well as sensual. Oh, how I do love 'a dewdrop on my lips.'

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  5. Quite the intimate dew drop, surely not a flop

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  6. Erotic,sensual as life and love should be.

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  7. Eloquent in its simplicity ... I love your poem.

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  8. Very tender and soft expressions:)

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  9. Tender and touching, i could feel the emotion.

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  10. Flowers - The tenderness can never be equaled. Nicely Grace!

    Hank

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  11. Sure in full bloom here today

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  12. I love the intimacy and emotion expressed here. This is one of those posts that the reader can "feel"

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  13. a whole voyage from fullmoon to dewdrop!

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  14. Lovely! Beautiful images in a few words!

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  15. Both beautiful and so many layers to the words!

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  16. Lovely and intimate Grace! You do this so well!

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  17. So lovely and sensual.

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  18. This took me in so many delightful directions! A ripple indeed!Ripples

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  19. delicately seductive...

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  20. Lovely feel in both haiku!! Beautiful!

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  21. Lovely imagery...and so well said!!

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  22. Lovely words...amazing and sensual...
    ahh, the power of verse
    Peace,
    Siggi

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  23. Grace, this is so gorgeous. You write sensuality with such taste and delicacy.

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  24. Lovely. Both of them. :-)

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  25. "fuller moon" and "dewdrop" are priceless descriptors! Just stunning.

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  26. I really enjoyed the imagery your words brought to mind. The actual images attached to the haiku are also apt and evocative. Thank you

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  27. Beautiful loved the second Haiku... well expressed (www.blogatcynthia.blogspot.in)

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  28. Grace, you really packed emotion and imagery in both of these haikus--very impressive (loved them both) :-)

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  29. Beautiful sensuous words, Grace. :-)

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