Thursday, March 3, 2016

Sunflower dreams during winter


Grace @ Everyday Amazing

Yellow petals stitched
    bewitched
By sun, a golden shawl
    I fall
for your charms
Lying in your arms
Tangled in honey kisses, no thorns
    to prick my knees
I am giddy as bee    
Bewitched, I fall (again), into your arms



Posted for D'verse Poets Pub - OpenLinkNight - Thanks for the visit  ~

Poetry form:  Ovillejo

29 comments:

  1. No thorns and just some lovin, not a bad way to be

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  2. A bloom will always find a sun... Love the concept of a flower like that, and I love how you used the Ovillejo..

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  3. Such a gorgeously written Ovillejo :D

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  4. What a romantic brush you used for this poem.

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  5. I love this glimpse of spring! Peace, Linda

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  6. Spring is just weeks away, & everything is blossoming; cheers & kudos for saluting it; soon, soon, the chill is gone.

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  7. Delightful Grace. Have a great weekend..

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  8. Very rhythmic... bewitching, in fact :-)

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  9. Gayle Walters RoseMarch 3, 2016 at 9:15 PM

    I think this must be your dream of spring to come, Grace, and it's a beautiful one.

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  10. I love that you used such a beautiful poem to tuck secrets inside. The honey kisses are surely something any bee would come to you for. I personally favor thorns, but I'm quite sure I'm in the minority.

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  11. "Tangled in honey kisses, no thorns"...this is made of dreamy beauty and love...

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  12. I love the wordplay in this. Bravo.

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  13. As soon as I read the title, I knew I'd love this micro echo poem. I had to read it aloud!

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  14. So many beautiful reasons in this world to fall for those charms...love this Grace.

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  15. Bewitched, I fall (again),
    into your arms

    How nice to be together!

    Hank

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  16. Ooh, that's my favorite flower! Because it's like an instant mood booster.

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  17. Oh smiling I am. My favorite flower of all time.....the sunniest, happiest flower in my mind. Would that I could be a bee, wrapped up in its love! Really enjoyed this one -- late to the bar I am. Posting and reading on Saturday....so nice and warm to read this over my Saturday cup of coffee. Happy I am!

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  18. Really romantic, Grace!
    Sunflowers have a lovely sunny yellow & usher positivity :)

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  19. Dreaming of sunflowers, summer. I love the anticipation in this, Grace. Wrap yourself up in that golden shawl--lovely image.

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  20. Giddy as a bee...great description of young love!

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  21. Getting wrapped up in your warmth. Soon! As always, thank you. Have a wonderful week!

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  22. A beautiful presentation, Grace. Love this.

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  23. Comparing love to a sunflower seems so natural Grace! I love sunflowers and your poem!

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  24. Bees Love
    kNows no
    Sun
    but
    LiGht..:)

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