Thursday, March 3, 2016

Sunflower dreams during winter


Grace @ Everyday Amazing

Yellow petals stitched
    bewitched
By sun, a golden shawl
    I fall
for your charms
Lying in your arms
Tangled in honey kisses, no thorns
    to prick my knees
I am giddy as bee    
Bewitched, I fall (again), into your arms

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 Poetry form:  Ovillejo
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29 comments:

  1. Pat HattMarch 3, 2016 at 2:35 PM

    No thorns and just some lovin, not a bad way to be

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  2. brudbergMarch 3, 2016 at 2:43 PM

    A bloom will always find a sun... Love the concept of a flower like that, and I love how you used the Ovillejo..

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  3. Sanaa RizviMarch 3, 2016 at 3:06 PM

    Such a gorgeously written Ovillejo :D

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  4. MaryMarch 3, 2016 at 3:12 PM

    What a romantic brush you used for this poem.

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  5. AnotherFearlessYear.netMarch 3, 2016 at 3:31 PM

    I love this glimpse of spring! Peace, Linda

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  6. Glenn ButtkusMarch 3, 2016 at 4:10 PM

    Spring is just weeks away, & everything is blossoming; cheers & kudos for saluting it; soon, soon, the chill is gone.

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  7. MichaelMarch 3, 2016 at 5:02 PM

    Delightful Grace. Have a great weekend..

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  8. UnknownMarch 3, 2016 at 6:49 PM

    Very rhythmic... bewitching, in fact :-)

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  9. Gayle Walters RoseMarch 3, 2016 at 9:15 PM

    I think this must be your dream of spring to come, Grace, and it's a beautiful one.

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  10. AnonymousMarch 3, 2016 at 11:49 PM

    I love that you used such a beautiful poem to tuck secrets inside. The honey kisses are surely something any bee would come to you for. I personally favor thorns, but I'm quite sure I'm in the minority.

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  11. Sherry Blue SkyMarch 3, 2016 at 11:59 PM

    This is sunny and lovely to read.

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  12. Sumana RoyMarch 4, 2016 at 12:13 AM

    "Tangled in honey kisses, no thorns"...this is made of dreamy beauty and love...

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  13. vivinfranceMarch 4, 2016 at 2:52 AM

    I love the wordplay in this. Bravo.

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  14. Kim M. RussellMarch 4, 2016 at 3:44 AM

    As soon as I read the title, I knew I'd love this micro echo poem. I had to read it aloud!

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  15. Mon.EspritMarch 4, 2016 at 12:50 PM

    So many beautiful reasons in this world to fall for those charms...love this Grace.

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  16. MargaretMarch 4, 2016 at 12:57 PM

    Very smooth, very lovely!

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  17. Maude LynnMarch 4, 2016 at 3:02 PM

    Really well done, Grace!

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  18. Carrie Van HornMarch 4, 2016 at 5:23 PM

    Sweet and lovely!

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  19. kaykualaMarch 4, 2016 at 8:49 PM

    Bewitched, I fall (again),
    into your arms

    How nice to be together!

    Hank

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  20. Lux G.March 5, 2016 at 4:11 AM

    Ooh, that's my favorite flower! Because it's like an instant mood booster.

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  21. lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comMarch 5, 2016 at 7:20 AM

    Oh smiling I am. My favorite flower of all time.....the sunniest, happiest flower in my mind. Would that I could be a bee, wrapped up in its love! Really enjoyed this one -- late to the bar I am. Posting and reading on Saturday....so nice and warm to read this over my Saturday cup of coffee. Happy I am!

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  22. Anita SabatMarch 5, 2016 at 11:57 AM

    Really romantic, Grace!
    Sunflowers have a lovely sunny yellow & usher positivity :)

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  23. VictoriaMarch 5, 2016 at 4:02 PM

    Dreaming of sunflowers, summer. I love the anticipation in this, Grace. Wrap yourself up in that golden shawl--lovely image.

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  24. UnknownMarch 6, 2016 at 12:16 AM

    Giddy as a bee...great description of young love!

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  25. Harish G.March 6, 2016 at 2:20 AM

    Sounds like a dream :)

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  26. AnonymousMarch 6, 2016 at 8:56 AM

    Getting wrapped up in your warmth. Soon! As always, thank you. Have a wonderful week!

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  27. Walter J. WojtanikMarch 6, 2016 at 2:01 PM

    A beautiful presentation, Grace. Love this.

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  28. Bekkie SanchezMarch 10, 2016 at 12:38 PM

    Comparing love to a sunflower seems so natural Grace! I love sunflowers and your poem!

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  29. Katie Mia FrederickMarch 11, 2016 at 5:37 PM

    Bees Love
    kNows no
    Sun
    but
    LiGht..:)

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