Grace @ Everyday Amazing - at our backyard
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heart of me - ashen purple - fell from the sky, spiral plunge.
the ground swelled as autumn burst into fire and licked my wounds.
i slow die - when forgiveness comes short - on bed of leaves, a black stone.
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sharpest blade - but oh so cold -
strongest wind, none can break me.
but my will, calm acceptance
to let go, and fall gently.
pale snowflake - into arms of lover -
moist brown as earth, warm cider.
Poetry form: This is a more developed form of tristich (poem in three lines) called Sijo[pronounced see-szo], which is the Korean cousin of Tanka and Haiku.
Lines 1 and 2 are written in four phrases of syllables counted as follows: 3 - 4 || 3 - 4 with a major pause at the end of the line (i.e. no enjambment) and a total of 14 syllables per line.
Line 3 is also written in four phrases of syllables counted: 3 - 6 || 4 - 3 to a total of 16 syllables.
Some leeway is allowed within this structure but the end result should be between 44 and 46 syllables.