Thursday, September 4, 2025

travel notes

 

empty

my pockets are

not, not when red leaves fall

on fern-bogged trails, my hands gather

feathers,


pinecones,  

blue-green river 

tides, snow-capped mountains, trees,

birdsongs, sky's blue, my chest swelling-

joy-packed




Posted for dVerse Poets Pub - MTB:  Cinquains Revisited, hosted by Bjorn Rudberg.  Thanks for your visits and comments.

16 comments:

  1. So many great things to gather.... it sounds so joyfull.

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  2. Delightful travel notes, Grace, and I enjoyed filling pockets with you. I already have my eye on conkers and acorns, which are abundant around here.

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  3. Pockets full of leaves makes a wealthy woman!

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  4. Grace, you make me think of the song, "The Happy Wanderer."

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  5. I think you have gathered the best of nature.

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  6. How utterly gorgeous! (I too am a great picker-up of feathers, stones, twigs, shells...)

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  7. Enjoyable read.

    Arcadia Maria

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  8. I understand that joy, I felt that yesterday when out in the bush. Makes me smile.

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  9. Reading you after a long time reminded me no one does nature poems like you. Grace, it is always a joy to read your verses.

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  10. Your travel notes are every person's dream ~ you have described much about the beauty surrounding me.

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  11. Nature's best gifts to us... so often overlooked by busy people. Well done, Grace.

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  12. You have deep pockets filled with treasures!

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  13. ah! Beautiful. Such a lovely write about walking the trails. :-)

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