Tuesday, March 26, 2024

the building (land acknowledgement)

you moonwalk out of the building

whose wall tiles are blue-etched in history


giant banners follow the marbled columns 

as you stand to witness sunset throbs 


in glorious colors, washing 

large window frames with ecru & peach tints


beneath black suit

how sober cold you hold yourself


refracted by city neon lights- 

you belong here yet not quite from the tilt of your head-


on cobbled steps, you marvel the carvings

and gothic shape of the building 


and hearing the folklore rising from the relics

and feeling its hot breath on your skin-


maybe it will take another decade or two

of walking & inhaling the sun-baked streets


to feel connected to the ancient land the building

stands after hearing the land acknowledgement


for now, you just want to respect 

the ties that bind us all under the eyes


of the ever-steady moon-

for now, you just want nothing more than be hurled


to the sky, star-wrinkled

glinting of mysteries, stirring in you an ocean of awe



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This is an example of a land acknowledgement:  

Land Acknowledgement for Toronto

We acknowledge the land we are meeting on is the traditional territory of many nations including the Mississaugas of the Credit, the Anishnabeg, the Chippewa, the Haudenosaunee and the Wendat peoples and is now home to many diverse First Nations, Inuit and Métis peoples. We also acknowledge that Toronto is covered by Treaty 13 with the Mississaugas of the Credit.


14 comments:

  1. I love how you contrast the city with the origin of original nations it resides in... a powerful poem, where after rereading made perfect sense.

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  2. Grace, thank you for sharing the 'land acknowledgement'. Very interesting and I love how you state "you belong here yet not quite from the tilt of your head-" and
    "for now, you just want nothing more than be hurled

    to the sky, star-wrinkled

    glinting of mysteries, stirring in you an ocean of awe" such an awesome ending!

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  3. 'the ties that bind us all'
    Such strong words. So true. A lovely poem, Grace.

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  4. I think it is great that your city gives this recognition to the first Nation's people who live/lived there. Very well done, Grace.

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  5. Interesting approach here into an acknowledgement which transforms the building in which it was decided (or "heard"). City rejoins the land and the people in the voice of this poem. Well done, Grace. Around here the suburbs are built over ghosts.

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  6. I like the flow of this poem, rather like the rambling of a wild plant. I suppose true acknowledgement of the rights of the land would be to leave it alone, unpolluted and free, but in our days, that isn't going to happen. Business is still business.

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  7. Love your land acknowledgement. "You belong here, yet not quite".
    Peoples finally being acknowledged is powerful.

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  8. Such a lyrical exploration, Grace. I'm seeing more land acknowledgements in my area, too.

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  9. Awesome poem Grace.

    maybe it will take another decade or two

    of walking & inhaling the sun-baked streets



    to feel connected to the ancient land the building


    stands after hearing the land acknowledgement


    Hopefully one day we will all feel that true connection to an ancient land. :)

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  10. Does land acknowledgement carry any legal weight? When I've seen it in Australia it always felt like it was to ease the 'white man's burden' more than anything else. Aborginals are still treated like shit and I don't see much different in North America for Native Americans - though I have no personal experience of either. 😢

    Will Israel ever issue a 'land acknowledgement'? 🧐

    Ugh....

    Sorry, I like your poem though!

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  11. A beautiful ceremony--we should acknowledge every land in this way, and also that the land belongs to all living creatures, not just humans.

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  12. a potent poem Grace as the poet and reader begin to connect "hearing the folklore rising from the relics"

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  13. Powerful poem, with a beautiful ending, Grace!

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  14. I like the way you draw us to the building having been built on existing land at once natural at once indigenous. That all buildings have a history not entirely their own.

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