Under the maple trees, we fall
Soft as pinecones, sun-creased skin
We worry not where we land and rust
We embrace the autumn season
We are kin with elm, oak, pine, spruce
And so many more than we can count
We worry not where we fit & thrive
With wildflowers at our feet
When sky is blue, we breathe as one
At night, we dream of stars, all bright
We worry not about darkness
And bow to the tides of the moon
We grow older than elephants
With wrinkles, warts & wounds
We revel our fruits & seed pods
Instead of poison, spikes and strifes
We are your lungs and history
But we can also be barren land
When forgetting about us, a voice calls
For war, spilling oil, blood and gore
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This is exquisitely woven, Grace! I especially admire this part; "When sky is blue, we breathe as one/At night, we dream of stars, all bright/We worry not about darkness/And bow to the tides of the moon." ❤️❤️
ReplyDeleteI do love the thought of bringing forth that voice.. so much beauty in that one, and we would not exist without them (we should listen)
ReplyDelete"We are your lungs and history" - very telling lines on many dimensions Grace
ReplyDeleteI really like the premise of ‘we are lungs and history’, Grace, and the kinship with trees in autumn. I love the line: ‘We worry not where we land and rust’ and the beauty described: the sky, the stars and the tides of the moon, but oh, that terrible reminder of the other things we are capable of as humans in the final stanza.
ReplyDelete"We are your lungs and history" . . . we are your breath as you breath now....as you did in past generations...as you will in the future. The last two stanzas are, in my opinion, profound.
ReplyDeleteYou capture the gentle nature and the strength of trees. I like how you regard them as a barometer of healthy ways of being for us when we follow their lead.
ReplyDeleteWhat everyone said about 'lungs and history'. Some collectives are pure goodness. None of our human collectives manage more than an intermittent well-meaning.
ReplyDeleteBorders and territories mean nothing to trees and plants whose only purpose is to live, any which way. So democratic!
ReplyDeleteYou had me at the title, but this is a poem to read and re-read. 💙
ReplyDeleteVery nicely done! Trees are our life's breath. So often we forget!
ReplyDeleteSo much to love about this - and I had to giggle over the elephants and wrinkly skin
ReplyDelete“At night, we dream of stars, all bright”
ReplyDeleteSo much said in that.🌟
That last verse is so timely, so pertinent.
ReplyDeleteMuch💛love
Trees are our lungs so wisely stated. We need them for survival. The image of the wildflowers at their feet shows unity in nature. All having a place to belong.
ReplyDeleteWhat a deep appreciation your poem invokes for our leafy benefactors, Grace. The One who created trees is wise indeed!
ReplyDeleteBreathing as one. May it be forever so. We have a way to go, your poem gives hope.
ReplyDeletei will be back for more than one re read of this beautiful poem
ReplyDeleteSuch a wonderfully written poem. I love it Grace.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written
ReplyDeleteThere's something urgent about this - we are your lungs, and I love the way you offer a voice by the trees, wonderful.
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