Thursday, October 19, 2023

we are lungs and history

 

Under the maple trees, we fall

Soft as pinecones, sun-creased skin

We worry not where we land and rust

We embrace the autumn season


We are kin with elm, oak, pine, spruce

And so many more than we can count

We worry not where we fit & thrive

With wildflowers at our feet


When sky is blue, we breathe as one

At night, we dream of stars, all bright

We worry not about darkness

And bow to the tides of the moon 


We grow older than elephants

With wrinkles, warts & wounds

We revel our fruits & seed pods

Instead of poison, spikes and strifes


We are your lungs and history

But we can also be barren land

When forgetting about us, a voice calls

For war, spilling oil, blood and gore



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20 comments:

  1. This is exquisitely woven, Grace! I especially admire this part; "When sky is blue, we breathe as one/At night, we dream of stars, all bright/We worry not about darkness/And bow to the tides of the moon." ❤️❤️

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  2. I do love the thought of bringing forth that voice.. so much beauty in that one, and we would not exist without them (we should listen)

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  3. "We are your lungs and history" - very telling lines on many dimensions Grace

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  4. I really like the premise of ‘we are lungs and history’, Grace, and the kinship with trees in autumn. I love the line: ‘We worry not where we land and rust’ and the beauty described: the sky, the stars and the tides of the moon, but oh, that terrible reminder of the other things we are capable of as humans in the final stanza.

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  5. "We are your lungs and history" . . . we are your breath as you breath now....as you did in past generations...as you will in the future. The last two stanzas are, in my opinion, profound.

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  6. You capture the gentle nature and the strength of trees. I like how you regard them as a barometer of healthy ways of being for us when we follow their lead.

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  7. What everyone said about 'lungs and history'. Some collectives are pure goodness. None of our human collectives manage more than an intermittent well-meaning.

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  8. Borders and territories mean nothing to trees and plants whose only purpose is to live, any which way. So democratic!

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  9. You had me at the title, but this is a poem to read and re-read. 💙

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  10. Very nicely done! Trees are our life's breath. So often we forget!

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  11. So much to love about this - and I had to giggle over the elephants and wrinkly skin

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  12. “At night, we dream of stars, all bright”

    So much said in that.🌟

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  13. That last verse is so timely, so pertinent.

    Much💛love

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  14. Trees are our lungs so wisely stated. We need them for survival. The image of the wildflowers at their feet shows unity in nature. All having a place to belong.

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  15. What a deep appreciation your poem invokes for our leafy benefactors, Grace. The One who created trees is wise indeed!

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  16. Breathing as one. May it be forever so. We have a way to go, your poem gives hope.

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  17. i will be back for more than one re read of this beautiful poem

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  18. Such a wonderfully written poem. I love it Grace.

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  19. There's something urgent about this - we are your lungs, and I love the way you offer a voice by the trees, wonderful.

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