Give me your feverish thoughts
Mothballed & hand-stitched in grey
A cabin, circled by oak trees
The twilight sky on summer's day
Wheat field is warm as amber
The roar of wind, hoots by owls
I will bottle it up with moss
And set it to sail at midnight
New moon is a goddess
And stars are glowing fireflies
I watch it adrift on waves
As if time is a standstill, much
Like you, sleeping as a baby
The past clings to you, blanket
Where will the bottle go, I wonder
There are no maps & shores to keep
Where will it land with no compass
Who will open it with excitement
Whose heart belongs amongst wildflowers
Or with questions, whose mind dwells
On clouds, or maybe it will be
You
Awakening, with eyes of child
You can recall
Where you had put away
the pen, that magical pen
Where you drew all your flights with joy
Chorus of birds sang with you all the way
The direct address in the title drew me in before I even read the opening lines, Grace, and then you amazed me with the colourful phrases: ‘thoughts /
ReplyDeleteMothballed & hand-stitched in grey’ and ‘Wheat field is warm as amber’. A magical, bed-time story of a poem.
I love the way this poem explores the image, a real journey through enchantment.
ReplyDeleteSo many beautiful, magical lines, Grace! Love it.
ReplyDeleteOh I can feel the gentle sway of this bottle of thoughts, journeying to others or back to where they began...to remember and cherish. So beautiful this is....
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Delete"Give me your feverish thoughts
ReplyDeleteMothballed & hand-stitched in grey"
Your start up lines drew me in. There is no way i wouldn't read on
Muchđź’–love
Very well done, Grace! The eyes of a child still lurk within all of us it seems
ReplyDeleteI feel like this message needs to be sealed into the bottle before it sets sail. Imagine being the person who opens it...
ReplyDeleteGreat poem to go with this artwork.
ReplyDeleteThis reads like a magical dream. I don't see mothballed used in poems much so that was an added delight. We have to keep a hold of that magical pen - always, my friend.
ReplyDeleteIt is always a wonder when the magic pen gets into action upon getting up again. We can't anticipate the number of poems that will be created but there will be. Love it Grace!
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There is a feeling of wave motion in this poem - well done!
ReplyDeleteGreat response to a great image. Even just a message in a bottle represents another world.
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ReplyDeleteSoothing and lullaby-like.
ReplyDeleteMagical ❤️
ReplyDeleteLove the image you chose Grace. Excellent poem as well my friend. Love the magic in this piece. Very alluring.
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“Like you, sleeping as a baby
ReplyDeleteThe past clings to you, blanket”
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