Spring showers, wild honeycombs, bed of seeds
Swirl last snowflake to dust, grey to green buds
Our skin is pale moon under pewter sky
Spring showers, wild honeycombs, bed of seeds
Soak our words with birdsongs, maple & spice
Our faces are flowers, dewed by dusk
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I love that strong wish in all those buds going for grey to green, but most of all our pale faces.. it doesn't matter that the sky is pewter..
ReplyDeleteWe are both looking forward to spring in our poems, whether showers, flowers or hares! I love the lines:
ReplyDelete‘Our skin is pale moon under pewter sky’
and
‘Our faces are flowers, dewed by dusk’.
that threesome repeat line is very musical -
ReplyDelete"Soak our words with birdsong" - yes please - a gorgeous line
Beautiful words and wishes Grace, beautifully serene.
ReplyDeleteSpring has sprung!
Anna :o]
Hoping it arrives soon. This moon face droops lately.
ReplyDeleteYou've set me up for Spring perfectly. Remember me? It's been a while.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful intro to much-awaited Spring!
ReplyDeleteThis sounds very like spring to me, lovely words.
ReplyDeleteYour words and the sound of the words itself sing poetically in tune with the coming of spring and beauty. :)
ReplyDeleteI like how words are soaked with birdsong.
ReplyDeleteAnd hopefully spring will spring soon, sure captured it all.
ReplyDeleteLike a song from the forests. I like the repeating lines and the ending, "Our faces are flowers, dewed by dusk" Lovely.
ReplyDeleteI really like the carefully layered detail you use here, Grace to build a steadily growing atmosphere here - the coming of the Spring...
ReplyDeleteSuch a beautiful poem of spring. I particularly like that last line.
ReplyDeleteMy goodness this is beyond beautiful, Grace!💝 Especially love the image; "Soak our words with birdsongs, maple & spice."🌳🌷
ReplyDeleteReally good depiction of colors and nature
ReplyDeleteYes, I am so ready for spring!
ReplyDeleteOur faces are flowers, dewed by dusk --- is an exquisitely beautiful line.
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ReplyDeleteAll the elements of spring, woven togehter!
ReplyDelete"Soak our words with birdsongs, maple & spice" Oh that is a glorious line~
ReplyDeleteThis is gorgeous, Grace - our faces pale moons under a pewter sky........words soaked in birdsong, maple and spice.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful spring poem!
ReplyDeleteOur faces are flowers...what a beautiful thing to say. I can smell it, the spring in your poem. Just lovely.
ReplyDeleteVery nice poem Grace. Spring is just around the corner. I liked this line....
ReplyDeleteOur skin is pale moon under pewter sky
Yes... c'mon Spring
ReplyDeleteLovely spring wishes.
ReplyDeleteSpring is an exciting time, I love spring and fall best! The changes are awesome.
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