Thursday, March 5, 2020

Spring wishes





Spring showers, wild honeycombs, bed of seeds
Swirl last snowflake to dust, grey to green buds
Our skin is pale moon under pewter sky   
Spring showers, wild honeycombs, bed of seeds 
Soak our words with birdsongs, maple & spice 
Our faces are flowers, dewed by dusk



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29 comments:

  1. I love that strong wish in all those buds going for grey to green, but most of all our pale faces.. it doesn't matter that the sky is pewter..

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  2. We are both looking forward to spring in our poems, whether showers, flowers or hares! I love the lines:
    ‘Our skin is pale moon under pewter sky’
    and
    ‘Our faces are flowers, dewed by dusk’.

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  3. that threesome repeat line is very musical -
    "Soak our words with birdsong" - yes please - a gorgeous line

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  4. Beautiful words and wishes Grace, beautifully serene.
    Spring has sprung!
    Anna :o]

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  5. Hoping it arrives soon. This moon face droops lately.

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  6. You've set me up for Spring perfectly. Remember me? It's been a while.

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  7. Beautiful intro to much-awaited Spring!

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  8. This sounds very like spring to me, lovely words.

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  9. Your words and the sound of the words itself sing poetically in tune with the coming of spring and beauty. :)

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  10. I like how words are soaked with birdsong.

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  11. And hopefully spring will spring soon, sure captured it all.

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  12. Like a song from the forests. I like the repeating lines and the ending, "Our faces are flowers, dewed by dusk" Lovely.

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  13. I really like the carefully layered detail you use here, Grace to build a steadily growing atmosphere here - the coming of the Spring...

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  14. Such a beautiful poem of spring. I particularly like that last line.

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  15. My goodness this is beyond beautiful, Grace!💝 Especially love the image; "Soak our words with birdsongs, maple & spice."🌳🌷

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  16. Really good depiction of colors and nature

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  17. Yes, I am so ready for spring!

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  18. Our faces are flowers, dewed by dusk --- is an exquisitely beautiful line.

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  20. All the elements of spring, woven togehter!

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  21. "Soak our words with birdsongs, maple & spice" Oh that is a glorious line~

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  22. This is gorgeous, Grace - our faces pale moons under a pewter sky........words soaked in birdsong, maple and spice.

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  23. Our faces are flowers...what a beautiful thing to say. I can smell it, the spring in your poem. Just lovely.

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  24. Very nice poem Grace. Spring is just around the corner. I liked this line....
    Our skin is pale moon under pewter sky

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  25. Spring is an exciting time, I love spring and fall best! The changes are awesome.

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