I want sunsets
(irish whiskey)
Stardust
(margarita)
(margarita)
Kisses deep
(red sangria)
Scribble me, love
(storms)
Scent of yesterday’s rain
(stirred chaser)
between bedsheets
(tipsy drunk)
lavender & roses
(tangled kamikaze)
(storms)
Scent of yesterday’s rain
(stirred chaser)
between bedsheets
(tipsy drunk)
lavender & roses
(tangled kamikaze)
Posted for D'verse Poets Pub - OpenLinkNight - A late entry for De's prompt on muse mixology ~Thanks for the visit ~
Can't be beat between those sheets
ReplyDeleteLove your take on the bar prompt... tangled kamikaze is great.
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ReplyDeleteFun treatment of the pub terms!
ReplyDeleteSmoking hot!!!❤️
ReplyDeleteNice continuation on the last prompt. I forget the name of the form with the echo discordant second lines. I did enjoy that one.
ReplyDeleteEn bref, ma chere, you want to be loved! :-)
ReplyDeleteGreetings from London.
High-spirited poem, 100% proof :)
ReplyDeleteI missed this prompt. Glad you caught up with it. Very nice.
ReplyDeleteWonderful take on the prompt. Love that you used the word for the scent of rain in the title.
ReplyDeleteThere is something so very sensuous in these words Grace, so well done and alluring.
ReplyDeletescent of yesterday's rain....that stood out for me! An interesting form this one.
ReplyDeleteFor me, the last line combines the two voices--love this form and love what you did with it
ReplyDeleteThis is my favorite of those written for this prompt. Seriously hot, romantic, lusty, seductive, soft, hard, yummy ... every sexy adjective I can think of. You walk in the middle so well, not being too softcore, but not going too far into the hard, either. I love this piece. I love your work. I love you. Beautiful. Brilliant. Completely Grace.
ReplyDeleteI liked these lines: "Scribble me, love
ReplyDelete(storms)"
Very imaginative handling of the challenge
ReplyDeleteah, each line like top and bottom sheets together. Hi, Grace ~
ReplyDeleteVery clever and beautifully done ��
ReplyDeleteWell done!
ReplyDeleteA wonderfully evocative and erotic piece of writing Grace.
ReplyDeleteThe jargon well at play. Perhaps a sure way to see that the bottle is doing the speaking!
ReplyDeleteHank
An interesting prompt that made for some tantalizing poetry. I enjoyed the phraseology you elicited from that mixology.
ReplyDeleteLove your take on De's prompt!
ReplyDeleteWonderful! My favorite is "kisses deep -- red sangria".... :)
ReplyDeleteSoo late to reading...fear I will not catch up for Thursdays...but will be on top of it for Quadrille and my poetics. Bermuda is too beautiful!
I especially love theml phrases scribble me, love and tangles kamikazee, but the form is just lovely.
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