Grace @ Everyday Amazing
a red leaf falls
soft as sunset, i read back
your words, lingering bright on my pages
you gifted me
187 comments for the last 2 years
thank you ~
"the Goddess in the garden":
Lovely splash of all that summer should be.
"What i remind myself at night":
Full of good things, a most compelling poem. My favourite couplet:
"The sun hides behind the ruffled clouds.
And mustard walls, penciled with industrial carpet."
"What the sign said: Pennies are ok!":
their drug & eden (lost) -- Brilliant, but the poem had me as a fan long before that!
"at night, unboxed":
I see this as a tender portrait of someone coping well with the rat race,
"Beneath the skin":
Beautifully handled. Exquisite.
The third stanza is a real humdinger. Lights up the whole poem.
Somewhat above the general run of such poems. Lovely thoughts and lines.
Which leaves us all agog for the main event -- which is exactly what it should do.
"m(a)ystery of the woman":
Yes, witch to queen, a new plot so far as I'm concerned. Powerful in itself and powerfully portrayed here. Excellent.
These are just some of the comments I have received from Dave from both of my blogs. His first comment to me was June 27, 2011.
"I do believe you have prompted me to visit the dentist for a much put-off job - and that's no small achievement, so congrats! "
Shared with D'verse Poets Pub - For David King, who has passed away last Oct. 4, 2013.