Wednesday, September 28, 2011

Water



cadence of water
rushing in, rushing out, rush
morning, evening tide




rhythm of water
waving in, waving out, wave
sun rise to sun set 




Haiku Heights:   Prompt # 87 is Rhythm   


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10 comments:

  1. perfect rhythm in these words, very calming

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  2. I feel and hear the water...a chance for inner peace

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  3. The rhythm of the seas, well captured!!

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  4. This conjured up images of long, calming walks by the sea. Excellent work!

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  5. Wow, waving in rhythm.. what a sight..to cherish.. thanks..

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  6. Coming and going...I can see a lot of movements. The water is alive when standing by the sea seeing the waves lapping the shore. Beautiful haiku!

    Hank

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  7. These rhythms are calming ... I love to listen to the ebb and flow!!

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  8. I find the rhythm (or cadence) of water refreshing to my soul...


    Rhythms here and here

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