Wednesday, September 7, 2011

Rain

soft patter of rain
falling on green leafy shrubs
hardened by the sun





peering under leaf
waiting for the rain to stop
to leap out of sight


picture credit:   http://lori-rocks.tumblr.com/post/7121368454


15 comments:

  1. Both solid pieces; the 2nd grabs me more than the 1st, though, esp the photo. Unique.

    ReplyDelete
  2. great haikus...love the frog peeking out from the leaves

    ReplyDelete
  3. The two Haikus along with the photo make a great masterpiece. They each compliment the other. Good job!

    ReplyDelete
  4. great photo to go with superb haiku's

    ReplyDelete
  5. I love his transparent hiding place.

    ReplyDelete
  6. Well, well, this is well thought out..

    ReplyDelete
  7. Well done and the picture perfect!! LOL!!... ingenious enough to overcome the rain.

    ReplyDelete
  8. Two great haiku. The second one was my favourite.
    Loved the picture.

    ReplyDelete
  9. Hidden things have a habit of waiting for just the right moment to leap out. Sometimes it's an inopportune moment!

    Hidden things here and here and here

    ReplyDelete
  10. I do like this, haiku and picture. Both so pretty.

    ReplyDelete
  11. Gracefull haikus. Each word a rosy picture. Thank You for sharing so sweet and great.

    ReplyDelete
  12. Oh this is so cool, and the picture what an awesome part of your post!

    ReplyDelete
  13. oh yes. this is indeed, picture perfect :) well done!

    ReplyDelete

Thank you for your comments and visit. I appreciate them ~