Monday, September 26, 2011

Daybreak



sun stood poised on clouds  
rays of splendour on her cloak  
ready for new day

the tree stood erect 
greeting the bright morning sun
leaves, branches hushed still



Haiku Heights - Prompt # 85 is Poise

picture credit:   http://lori-rocks.tumblr.com/post/9414136976

14 comments:

  1. gorgeous words and photo...I was going to pick a favorite phrase in each, but I love every word of both haikus

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  2. those first two lines just grab, nice one

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  3. Pleasant post..thank you.
    ☮ Siggi in Downeast Maine

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  4. So much grace and poise seen here in the picture and words!!

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  5. I like the sense of tension and energy in your haiku, and the description of the sun in the sky is lovely. I hope they got together secretly, as soon as it went dark.

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  6. Yes, on to a new day. Great pics!

    Hank

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  7. Lovely haiku and beautiful picture!!

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  8. Lovely words.
    I loved that line 'sun stood poised on clouds' - just great.

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  9. Beautiful words! In Mid Oct. I scheduled a post of a painting I did a few years ago that i had called Daybreak. So, hope you come to my corner to look at it

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  10. I'm waiting for that poised sun to start dancing!

    Poised and poise

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  11. Stunning visual through your words ~~

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