my mind is a puddle of fluff & fuss
my hands are busy clocks & cords
you tell me, it is not complicated-
it is either this way or that way
this way is to walk with the cat
or that way is go inside the room and wear
tall crown I made, a Queen's golden crown
or a joker's cone cap
and if I choose a joker's cone cap,
is it going to make me laugh to oblivion
because I know my indecision of things
can really get in the way - see the empty
table? you tell me - easy,
walk with the cat, as if it is
really a quiet walk on the path, out
out of this churning madness of choices
in my head, a nest of noisy birds
waiting for mother's treat & ultimate goal-
freedom
[walking out & away with the cat]
in my dreamscape, I am a white horse
bolting out of the frame, towards the moon
but my feet are rooted in threads, deep in silos-
where and when (things past)
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Oh... this is wonderful, we live in a web of choices all the time. Love the entanglement you found in the picture. I look forward to the session tonight.
ReplyDeleteI hear her earnest plea in the surreality...
ReplyDeleteWhat a fun ekphrastic poem, Grace, from the first to last line. I love the pace, the conversational tone, and especially the lines:
ReplyDelete‘in my dreamscape, I am a white horse
bolting out of the frame, towards the moon’.
What to do, what to do? Awake its either/or and dreaming its pour me some more ... Fun poem Grace, waltzing on its high wire.
ReplyDelete"you tell me - easy,
ReplyDeletewalk with the cat, as if it is
really a quiet walk on the path, out
out of this churning madness of choices"
Poignant write
Much♡love
Poignsnt
I enjoyed your interpretation of this enigmatic artwork...making such choices can be more complicated than it appears
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Deletein my dreamscape, I am a white horse
ReplyDeletebolting out of the frame, towards the moon
Oh yeah, that's the line that activated my dormant girls and horses gene. Now I want to be an equestrian astronaut when I grow up. (No word on when that might be.)
My mind feels like a puddle when I'm in indecision! I want to be that horse!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Kim. I love that line.
ReplyDeleteWonderful use of the imagination to create this poem. I would def be the white horse in a dreamscape.
ReplyDeletein my dreamscape, I am a white horse
bolting out of the frame, towards the moon
Your poem really captured indecisiveness!
ReplyDeleteThis is a delightful poem, and I think the artist would have loved it as a companion piece for her painting. Bravo!
ReplyDeletean incredible ekphrastic Grace - every brush stroke accounted for in lyricism
ReplyDeleteI love how you look at the picture, Grace. Its quirky yet relatable.
ReplyDeleteWhat a fun poem to read, Grace!
ReplyDeleteThis is an interesting poem, Grace. Life is full of choices and they all have consequences. I enjoyed your take on the painting. Robbie Cheadle
ReplyDeleteA wonderful response to the painting, Grace. I love the way the narrator looks at choices. The closing lines are perfect!
ReplyDeleteVery nicely done.
ReplyDeleteWhether strung out or strung in, we are tethered to the world and our "feet" "rooted to the threads," even in the surreal world.
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