harvest moon, cast your magic spell-
moonshine above the trees, we'll dwell
on your milky dreams, do not tell
us poets that we cannot write
myths, songs & sonnets of black knights,
sad ballads of yesterdays, sprites
enamored with lost love, don't quell
our secrets, so we may tear
down books & canvas with no fear-
torch monuments with our spears-
only pen letters that moves, swells
our ribs to waves of darkest sea
our heart with songs by the bees
our feet to stardust, far & free
we hold you - a pearl, breathing shell
Posted for dVerse Poets Pub: Poetry Form is Zéjel is a Spanish form with Arabic influence. The pub doors open at 3pm EST. Info about the form:
Here are the basic rules for zejel:
First stanza is a tercet (3-line stanza) with an AAA rhyme scheme
All other stanzas are quatrains (4-line stanzas) with a XXXA rhyme scheme, so the second stanza would be BBBA, third CCCA, fourth DDDA, and so on to the end of the poem
Lines are usually 8 syllables long
Wonderful words!
ReplyDeleteI love the feeling of complicity with the moon: I think most poets can identify with that feeling, for all of the inspiration it provides!
ReplyDeleteOh, this is wonderful! It sings with magic--a delight!
ReplyDeleteI love the magic setting with the moon, so timely with the autumn full moon here. My Chinese colleagues have just feasted on moon cake.
ReplyDeletethe moon was starting to show her face as i cycled home from work this evening. i am sure her spell has been cast here.
ReplyDeleteGrace,
ReplyDeleteFrom "harvest moon" to "a pearl, breathing shell" you had me holding my breath on this magical, whimsical description of poetic yearnings. Brilliant.
pax,
dora
Bravo! Luv it
ReplyDeleteMuch💖love
Well written Grace!
ReplyDeleteThe moon as a pearl—brilliant image! And the milky dreams bit makes me think of having a baby/breastfeeding. It’s almost like this whole group of poets and artists is having a baby together, with some romantic lighting provided by the moonshine. The baby, the pearl, could even be a collaborative book.
ReplyDeleteI love that song—“Harvest Moon.”
I've been captured by the moon lately as well. Your poem makes me want to go out and look at it now.
ReplyDeleteWhat a spell you have cast with your beautiful Zéjel!
ReplyDeletebeautiful
ReplyDeleteHow many poets have been inspired by "moonshine above the trees"? Indeed all is at our fingertips with her beauty.
ReplyDeleteWhat a magical poem Grace!
ReplyDeleteThe moon with all of its wonders, rightly framed in your write. Wonderful take Grace!
ReplyDeleteHank
So beautiful! I think I did mine wrong,
ReplyDeleteI guess we were both thinking about the moon - love your moon-inspired Zéjel.
ReplyDeleteThis is so well done Grace. You really caught the rhythm of this form. With wonderful images, as always.
ReplyDeletewritten with whimsical artistic flair ..
ReplyDeleteahh for harvest moons and pearl shells,
a magical spell
Relatable. So lovely and romantic. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteI love 'dwelling on the moon's milky dreams'.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, Grace!