on my palm, you are sun
goddess made by the tropical
gods in their dreams
i cut you
across your seed
lengthwise
as your yellowing juice
drips & tinges
my fingertips of heavenly
sweetness
some would even
cut your flesh into little squares
to be spooned into
desserts light & creamy as clouds
but by the streets & shores
of hardy farmers, fishermen & tradesmen
we holler for you
salivating over
your hard green
skin of unripeness
a tartness to rouse our tongues
to firehouse
of bitter-sour flavor
the earth has pickled in your seed
either freshly picked
or mixed with diced tomatoes,
onions, chiles and
shrimp paste sauce,
a side dish
for grilled fish and fried meats
under cool shades
of coconut trees,
your greenness gives us
roots
salt of our skin
browning under the burning sun
Posted for dVerse Poets Pub - How to cut a pomegrante, hosted by Kim M. Russell. Join us for a fruity prompt when the pub doors open by 3pm EST.
Gosh! This is an absolute treat, Grace!💝 I especially love; "some would even cut your flesh into little squares
ReplyDeleteto be spooned into desserts light & creamy as clouds."😍
I knew beforehand that you would write about mangoes... I have learned one thing and that is that every country that has mangoes say that they have the best ones. I think one of the best ones I ever had was in Manila...
ReplyDeleteYou know me well Bjorn, smiles.
DeleteI really got the flavour of your poem here, Grace:
ReplyDelete'skin of unripeness
a tartness to rouse our tongues
to firehouse
of bitter-sour flavor'
Yes, I can taste that! I'd love to go to a country where mangoes grow in such abundance.
The mango is one of my favourite fruits, about which I have written previously, which is why I went for the good old English apple. This is gorgeous, Grace, a lovely poem to take with me and read at my leisure. I love the idea of the mango as a sun goddess, the ‘yellowing juice [that} drips & tinges my fingertips’, and the change in taste to ‘a tartness to rouse our tongues to firehouse of bitter-sour flavor’ – not everyone knows the two sides to a mango. The side dish made my mouth water!
ReplyDeleteThis is so delicious.
ReplyDeleteI love the touch of cannibalistic suggestion embedded in this. :)
“some would even
cut your flesh into little squares”
“on my palm, you are sun
goddess”
Very Hannibal Lecter, but with fruit! ... Hey, I had a guy call me the girl Hannibal this weekend. :)
The mango is one of my favorite fruits and oh my.....you truly have me wanting a taste! Your poem is indeed one to savor! :)
ReplyDeleteOne of my absolute favorite fruits. My hubby makes the best mango salsa ever. Seeing her as "sun goddess" is just perfection. So much to love here, Grace.
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing, and I think I'm going to save it to give it more re-reads. So much to uncover in the appreciation of the mango in each line like:
ReplyDelete"some would even
cut your flesh into little squares
to be spooned into
desserts light & creamy as clouds
but by the streets & shores
of hardy farmers, fishermen & tradesmen
we holler for you"
And I have to agree with one of the commenters above, I feel like the details are reminiscent to Lecter with how you explore this art of appreciation... though the difference is, it's with mangos, not humans. :D
I love this piece. It's beautiful, graphic, and utterly brilliant.
My mouth is literally watering.
ReplyDeleteI need to pick up mangoes now. This was wonderful, Grace.
ReplyDeleteSounds delicious - I like coconut shrimp dipped in a mango sauce.
ReplyDeleteI can feel your connection to this fruit
"your greenness gives us roots"
Nice to see you Grace, I hope you have been well
Oh that sounds and looks so delicious! It's easy to see you are bonded with mangos. Blessings indeed.
ReplyDeleteMango as sun goddess - yes, that works! The ultimate sunshine fruit. It's hard to get a perfect mango in the UK, but when you do - "we holler for you"!
ReplyDeleteMangos are like summertime to me. I love the firehouse image as the mango is so cheerful it's alarming. I didn't try mangos as a child, so I remember the first time and the summertime smile. Wonderful imagery, Grace.
ReplyDeleteFilipino mangoes. :( How I miss them and your words felt like a beautiful song for them. They made of gods, definitely. Thank you for this.
ReplyDeleteGrace,
ReplyDeleteI love mangoes and your poem makes me want to rush out and get some.
~��Dora
The variety of mango treats ... endless ~ your poem brings them into the warm bright light of a summer day!
ReplyDeleteor mixed with diced tomatoes,
ReplyDeleteonions, chiles and
shrimp paste sauce,
a side dish
Love the way you go around it in a poetry in motion like manner, Grace! We have a similar side dish taken at meal times as a salad or just by itself for the joy of it!
Hank
You sure know your mangoes, Grace. There is a time when that tart, unripened fruit is what the situation calls for, and that is a perfect Mango Moment.
ReplyDeleteAnd then there's a time when you just slurp and lick the juices from the same fruit. Glorious, Mango Moment!
I don't know in what land you get your mangoes but they're all touched by the same Sun so I know they are the best.
As for me, I grew up with the Mexico type and to this day believe in them.
Thanks for sharing your lovely poem. Delicious!