when night turns my bones to rust
and my wanderlust heart rolls away-
obliterate me into stardust
that i may see the light of million mirrors
without beginnings or endings
stretching into corridors of infinity
Aftermath Of Obliteration Of Eternity
Y. Kusama, Infinity Mirrors Exhibit
Art Gallery of Toronto
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This to reads like a jisei... a wish for something after, love the images of stars and light.
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful!
ReplyDeleteGorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous!💖
ReplyDeleteThis made me understand what it's like to be one with, not just in, the entire universe. Very concise and elegant.
ReplyDeleteOh, I'd love to see those corridors of infinity!
ReplyDeleteJust gorgeous Grace, poem and image! I love the (internal) rhyme of rust/wanderlust/stardust and the thought of a million mirrors 'stretching into corridors of infinity', which reminds me of my grandmother's dressing table mirrors which, if you angled them correctly, would create the illusion of never ending mirror images.
ReplyDeleteOooh, we all seem to have gone for night images - is this what is called a hive mind?
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful in its brevity, Grace!
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful. XX
ReplyDeleteEverything stretches and reflects indeed
ReplyDeleteSublime.
ReplyDeleteThis reminds me of the poems the fridge magnet oracle produces. Mystic and beautiful.
ReplyDeleteI love the imagery you bring to infinity, a beautiful word-mirror to the Y. Kusama painting xxx
ReplyDeleteA fantastically cosmic journey!
ReplyDeleteYour words filled my chest with their beauty Grace - truly lovely.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
I love this poem Grace. It doesn't have the syllable count but it puts me in mind of a Jisei. "Obliterate me into stardust....oh how I love this line.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful--I love this--the spare form fits the desire so wonderfully
ReplyDelete"Obliterate me into star dust"...Love that line.
ReplyDeleteThat's a beautiful prayer. Wander through the stars.
ReplyDeleteVery nice.
ReplyDeleteI liked this description phrase: "wanderlust heart rolls away"
ReplyDelete....that i may see the light of million mirrors..... You took me somewhere else with this.
ReplyDeleteInto infinity (and beyond) indeed!
ReplyDelete"without beginnings or endings
ReplyDeletestretching into corridors of infinity"
Oooh! I love that!
Obliterate me into stardust...then maybe a sense of belonging. Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteand my wanderlust heart rolls away-
ReplyDeleteobliterate me into stardust
Inclined to be together is being true to one's stand of giving support!
Hank
Oh. Short but sweet.
ReplyDeleteyou got me with the first line. elegant poem, Grace.
ReplyDeleteJane (Lady Nyo)
Grace, your poem is beautiful, and I love the picture that goes with!
ReplyDeleteThis is exquisitely beautiful - transcendent, really.
ReplyDeleteoooh Grace. Where you able to see this exhibit at the Broad? I was...and loved it!! simple really what we can do with some light and mirrors. and poetry is a reflection just like that.~a
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem, Grace.
ReplyDeletePondering what it's like to tread down a corridor of infinity -- idyllic or irksome? Either way, this reads wonderfully.
ReplyDeleteThat would be so beautiful,Grace!
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