Landscape photography by Alex Wallace
first poem
uncharted journey,
sweet red plums
~0~0
lover's kiss
soft as butterfly,
summer rain
~0~0
your goodbye,
frame in black and white,
stinging bee
Posted for Haiku Heights: First ~ My first poem in this blog
and Haiku My Heart
Every poem, I think, is an uncharted journey. Some end up as sweet as plums and some, well, we know how those taste, don't we? :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful set of haiku :-)
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These are lovely. Certainly is a uncharted journey until the muse gets on board :)
ReplyDeleteOh, and a beautiful picture and boat for your voyage of discovery.
DeleteLovely, goodbye as a sting framed in black and white!
ReplyDeleteOuch that would surely hurt, hopefully the bees stinger is removed haha, firsts can be grand.
ReplyDeletelove the line ....uncharted journey ~ well penned haiku ~~ thanks, ^_^ (A Creative Harbor)
ReplyDeleteA very nice atmosphere. Sweet and light and mysteriously simple. The very essence of poetry. Thank you grace.
ReplyDeleteIt's a lovely poem and your photo choice is stunning too!
ReplyDeleteLovely set...Last one was amazing!
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful poem to start your blog with... and your journey has been amazing. I really enjoy walking it with you. = )
ReplyDeleteUncharted journey is ideal, Grace! Forthwith sky is the limit! Great set of haiku, Ma'am!
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Amazing first poetry :) Love the photo too!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful set of haiku, Grace!
ReplyDeleteI sooo admire the way u write.. it's really not easy to phrase words like u do!
ReplyDeleteFirst peek of loving future
You have worded your thoughts so beautifully, Grace. I need to learn it from you, I believe. :)
ReplyDeletea beautiful set.. love the second one the most.... lovely..
ReplyDeleteouch...surely a painful end on this one...nice using the bee as well to bring the pain...not always what you are expecting...
ReplyDeleteI love all your haiku, especially the third one. :-)
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed them ALL
ReplyDeletesuch astonishing beauty yet with it; the first taste of summers end.
ReplyDeleteReal plums Grace! Good write!
ReplyDeleteLove them all three. Perfect little gems.
ReplyDeleteThat is one beautiful composition. :-)
ReplyDeletelovely set of Haiku... :)
ReplyDeleteGorgeous haiku!
ReplyDeleteLovely haiku. Recognise the sting of the last one. Brilliant.
ReplyDeleteFantastic haiku. It'w very well written. Keep posting more. Thank you.
ReplyDeletePersonally liked the second haiku,.
ReplyDeleteAll really nice. k.
ReplyDeleteI love the 'sweet plum' image I got from this.
ReplyDeleteThe skill of Haiku writing is profound and I think you have it. Here I detect the influence of William Carlos Williams (whose name is longer than his effective lines)--because of the plums, of course. That first bite of poetry is juicy like that and unapologetic, even if written before the first kiss. The three tell a story moving from innocence to experience, with even the break-up as another poem, a stinger, framed. Powerful writing. (it looks like you are saying "Oh, Oh" between each one--I missed it on #3 LOL)
ReplyDeleteI love all of them, especially the last one.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful set. I liked the middle one and then the punch in the last one ;-)
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