waves curl in blue rush
rhythm of sea, crushed cubes in
raspberry cocktail
~0~0
blue is the morning
sky above coconut trees,
seaweeds tangling shoe
~0~0
she wears a green dress,
white hat for St. Patrick's dance,
winter blues fading
Happy St. Patrick's Day to those who celebrate it.
Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteYou captured the rapture of blue~ Love it!
ReplyDeleteGetting all decked out in green and making those blues fade away sounds like a plan
ReplyDeleteI love! how lovely sounds this!! and love the pic:)anyway my favorite color is blue!
ReplyDeleteThe music of waves is in your words! Very beautiful!!!
ReplyDeleteI can almost hear the wave rolling.. I never saw such blue water though (our Dutch North Sea is dark-greyish-greenish... ) Enjoy your weekend!
ReplyDeletenice play on the blues....but today is green...smiles...so i hope you got some on so you wont get pinched....def hear the rhythm in this heaven
ReplyDeleteAwesome photo and great word play with haiku ~ thanks, namaste, Carol ^_^
ReplyDeleteLovely image of blues you've painted here. I love them all!
ReplyDeletethree beautiful haiku praising blue.
ReplyDeletei am swept away by each.
I loved te way you created each one, Grace...
ReplyDeleteBlue in all its shades. Excellent.
ReplyDeleteWonderfully composed triplet of haiku, thank you for sharing Grace.
ReplyDeleteLovely trio Grace, the first two took me right to the sea.
ReplyDeleteI love the second haiku. Wonderful imagery.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful haiku!
ReplyDeleteThis was a fun poem to read. I liked the part about the raspberry cocktail - so refreshing.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! :)
ReplyDelete"waves curl in blue rush"
ReplyDeleteWow! It's a lovely image!...
i like the idea of the winter blues fading with the joy of st. pat's day
ReplyDeletesenryu of blues & honesty
I liked that metaphor of an ocean to crushed cubes in a cocktail.
ReplyDeleteWinter blues fading, true enough Grace! Now onto wonderful spring!
ReplyDeleteHank
lovely, all. i used to be afraid of huge, rolling waves. somehow poetry helped calm my fear.
ReplyDeleteAnother enjoyable visit here!!
ReplyDeleteI know you love Pablo Neruda, me too, here I let you a link if you want to see, I let a poem of him too, but the best (and Imsure you will enjoy) is the isla negra house he was until die, is a beutiful and special house
ReplyDeletehttp://canelakitchen.blogspot.com/2008/12/poems-pablo-neruda-house-beach-and.htmlal house:)
Beautiful...waves curl in blue crush my favorite
ReplyDeleteThe last "stanza" is just delightful. I never imagined that the wearing of the green could banish the blues!
ReplyDeleteShadowy Blue Haiku
my goodness, i simply love the first Haiku Grace. and such delightful connotations of the word! i could perfectly imagine the coconut tress nodding with the blue sky in background :)
ReplyDeleteawesome :)
Love it!
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