red hibiscus by the gate opens up
to the morning sun, each petal surging
with glorious energy
the house remains the same
as if you and Dad are still here
your photos, your clothes, travel albums,
Dad's electronic gadgets & records
still litter the shelves & tables
its hard to believed it has been more
than 4 years, with the graves (yours & Dad's)
carefully tended
with yellow bells and red flowers, and grass-
i see that the cemetary is being spruced up for
the visitors who will clog the markers & graves
with candles & prayers in remembrance
of the dead on Nov. 1
the tradition is to travel and visit
with flowers, food, stories & merriment
laughter will be heard
as it is
indeed a celebration
of happy memories
of friends and family connections
i came to visit quietly and briefly
your travel mementos are still gracing the walls
your prayer inspired frames are still set up in the bathroom
your Zen-inspired garden outside the bedroom is thriving
though we are all moving on
we remember you and Dad with love
This is a follow up post to my original post titled, may you see field of tulips on your journey.
Posted for dVerse Poets Pub - Dia De Los Muertos, hosted by Mish. Pub doors open at 3pm.
Grace, this is so beautiful. Those who leave us continue to live in our memories.
ReplyDeleteSo very beautiful...and those little places with those memories... it is so very touching.
ReplyDeleteThere's a contrast between the personal memories enshrined in the house and the communal remembering of the cemetery. I know which appeals to me more.
ReplyDeleteOh, Grace. How beautiful, and sad. My heart is with you.
ReplyDeleteThis poem really arouses my empathy, Grace... It's gorgeously woven.
ReplyDelete~David
A great poem of remembrance, Grace. So sorry for your losses, both very difficult for you. You have done a beautiful tribute to them both.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful follow up to your 2018 piece. I felt it a privilege to read each detail of your loved ones passed on. Also, what a perfect poem in response to the prompt, sharing your own traditions on this day. I wish and pray for joyful memories to comfort you today and always. Sending love.
ReplyDeleteLovely remembrance, the push and traditions and surge of remembrances, and then the quiet. lovely
ReplyDeleteFrom Helen ~~~ your poem of remembrance for a sister and father is loving, perfect for the day of paying homage to those we have lost .. and loved.
ReplyDeleteMemories to cherish.
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