"Everyday in every way I’m getting better and better" - Emile Coue
Colourful narrative threads through your descriptive haikus!
Loved the 5pm version! LOL Thanks for hopping on the tandem again. ♥
Well captured moments of men's busy life...amidst the chiming time!
A soothing chime the most awaited one :) between the clanging and cacophony of a stadium!!
False Alarms are a pain, but definitely preferable. And I love the thought of the building sighing as people rush out for the weekend! ha.
I really like the chimes and strong images.
Chimes come in all shapes, sizes and sounds as you have demonstrated!Chimes here and here and here
Nice set of poems. What form are you using? It looks like 6-7-5. Maybe American modern Haiku. Nice work.Melanie
This has such lovely imagery!
Ah, the 5pm escape siren! :D I just wait for it! the haiku has an extra syllable in the opening line though!
Buildings sighing! LOVE IT.
Three colourful haiku - I could see the sounds brightly in your words
beautiful ....real carnival feel to this xxx
Three lovely haiku - I particularly liked the second.
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