Thursday, April 17, 2025

house [for sale]

 

i grew a body 

over the decades & seasons:

sturdy legs, giraffe high ceilings & brown

weathered arms during long winter nights


i found my stubborn voice 

from the brick chimney, incessant howling

of a child on a strong 

stormy day, black hair whiplashed by wind


i discovered my elephant's ears- 

doors opening and footsteps are news -

jostling voices by dinner table and kitchen 

are stories, as are goodbyes from the stoop and stairs


you talk to me as if i am more than bricks and stones

and painted white walls.  you see,  i stitched a tail 

to swim with blue whale at the basement and green-

thumbed my fingers to forest neon pothos 


and chatter with ferns & crotons & ivy -

-no we do not linger on chaos & turmoil of news-

we fill our heads with birdsongs & spring's arrival of lilacs-

& yes, i am scrubbed clean, ready for Sunday's open house- 


the woman holding the box of for-sale placards wrestles

with her decision - keep my keys or give it to someone else -

i like to believe i am priceless burrow of maps

and irreplaceable nest of "memories"


but reality hits as sudden hail storm on a sunny day-

regardless of the price tag listed in the property deed 

 - to safe keep my keys -

my face grew a character, familiar as musk of pines-


because all this time, you see, we grew in/

out of each other   

watching the dying sunlight by maple tree 


Posted for dVerse Poets Pub - MTB:  Magical Realism.   Join us when the virtual pub doors open at 3pm EST.   Please see our exciting 2026 Anthology Project to celebrate the 15th anniversary of dVerse Poets Pub here.  




16 comments:

  1. Pure magic, Grace, the way you construct the architecture of the "house" and the soul. So many images to love, but I especially loved
    "i discovered my elephant's ears-
    doors opening and footsteps are news -
    jostling voices by dinner table and kitchen
    are stories, as are goodbyes from the stoop and stairs"
    Amazing poetry.

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  2. I love how you build the personality of the house. My favorite lines are:

    because all this time, you see, we grew in/
    out of each other

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  3. I see what you mean about the stylistics...I absolutely love that bare house factual style of the verse here, and casual denouement. I have learnt so much tonight it is absolutely incredible. Really appreciated your poetry here, as it put all into a poem you mentioned before. In fact your poetry and presentation have touches of The Master and Margerita, which in much of Eastern Europe is THE reference for relevant literature. It really is such a joy to learn so much. Thank you, Grace. Am a great fan of Latin American literature as well.

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  4. It takes a zoo to do a proper nesting! Love the animation of a heart at home and the small but resilient resistence it has to outer chaos -- offering instead such eloquent intimacy.

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  5. I found a house growing into a giraffe, and then finding it's elephant very unique and something to think about.

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  6. And this is how it’s done! There’s so much to comment on in this surreal, magical poem, Grace, with its animal traits. I love the idea that a house might cuddle inhabitants with ‘brown weathered arms during long winter nights’ and the haunting ‘stubborn voice from the brick chimney’, ‘jostling voices by dinner table and kitchen’ that are stories, and the idea of inhabitants talking to the house. But what sold your house to me was the thought of filling heads with ‘birdsongs & spring's arrival of lilacs’, and the ‘dying sunlight by maple tree’.

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  7. Magixal. Luv this.
    Thanks for dropping by my blog

    Much♡love

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  8. What an interesting magical twist of a story. Great choice of subject, Grace!

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  9. Once in a while I ponder who might live in my house after I am gone. I think I would have to haunt them and drive them away!

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  10. This challenge suits your pen well, Grace!

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  11. So, qualification is what matters, and taste is it?

    🙂

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  12. Yes..a lovely and somehow heartbreaking poem. I unfortunately missed the Mr. Linky link with mine. Glad I didn't miss reading yours..and for some reason I am "Anonymous" as well...Judy Dykstra-Brown from Lifelessons

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  13. That was beautiful, Grace! Our house truly becomes a part of us. At least, for me, it does.

    Yvette M Calleiro :-)
    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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  14. "we do not linger" - wise and needed, these days ~

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