Thursday, May 16, 2024

lilacs

 


lilacs bloom during my birthday week   

along the pathways, they are all white  

and pink with fragrance a streak           

of jasmine and rose-almonds, spring    

air is cool while sunny sky is meek       

i walk on clouds, i write about love       

i gather dainty blossoms that reek        

of rain, promises and silky nights-          

lilacs on the vase, clustered & chic   



Posted for dVerse Poets Pub - Poetry Form, Magic 9.  Join us when the pub doors open at 3pm EST.  Thanks for the visit and comments.     

21 comments:

  1. Happy birthday on your birthday week, Grace! I enjoyed your scented lilac poem, especially these lines:
    ‘they are all white
    and pink with fragrance a streak
    of jasmine and rose-almonds’
    and
    ‘i gather dainty blossoms that reek
    of rain, promises and silky nights’.

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  2. a lovely ode to lilacs and your special week (sending birthday wishes Grace). memorable lines especially
    "i gather dainty blossoms that reek

    of rain,"

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  3. How lovely, Grace, an oasis of scents, colors, and beauty! I hear it's your birthday about now?! Best wishes to you and a very Happy Birthday!

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  4. Happy Birthday, Grace. How nice to have lilacs celebrate with you.

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  5. I hope you have or had a lovely birthday week, Grace! I love all the sensory details in this poem.

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  6. Sounds like you had a good birthday! :-) I love these lines:

    "i gather dainty blossoms that reek
    of rain, promises and silky nights - "

    They felt so French for some reason :-)

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  7. Bravo! Nice one.
    Thanks for dropping by my blog

    Much♡love

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  8. Happy birthday, Grace! Good to know you are a fellow Taurean. 🙂
    Your poem has fragrance and colours of spring. So lovely.

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  9. Happy Birthday, Grace and what better way to celebrate than a self-penned poem redolent with lilac fragrance...

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  10. Happy Birthday and I do love your birthday poem! It skips as you read like you're right there surrounded by colour and fragrant blooms.

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  11. Happy birthday! This poem is as full of scents, flowers and tastes as all your poetry!

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  12. Birthday Wishes!!!! I see the flowering lilacs, I smell their sweet fragrance right along with you. Cheers.

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  13. Happy Birthday, Grace. I love this line from your poem "i gather dainty blossoms that reek of rain" Lilacs are my favorite flower and scent

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  14. This is absolutely lyrical and light and lovely and lush.

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  15. This is so good, I read it many times to savour it.

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  16. Hi Grace, your magic 9 poem is delightful. I love the imagery. Thank you for the prompt.

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  17. Happy Birthday! Your poem brings the warmth of a spring day. Lilacs are in bloom here and smell heavenly.

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  18. Hi grace - I borrowed some lines from this poem for a Cento challenge at the Pub - https://how-would-you-know.com/2024/05/lament.html

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  19. “i walk on clouds, i write about love
    i gather dainty blossoms that reek
    of rain”

    I like these lines especially.❤️

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