lilacs bloom during my birthday week
along the pathways, they are all white
and pink with fragrance a streak
of jasmine and rose-almonds, spring
air is cool while sunny sky is meek
i walk on clouds, i write about love
i gather dainty blossoms that reek
of rain, promises and silky nights-
lilacs on the vase, clustered & chic
Posted for dVerse Poets Pub - Poetry Form, Magic 9. Join us when the pub doors open at 3pm EST. Thanks for the visit and comments.
Happy birthday on your birthday week, Grace! I enjoyed your scented lilac poem, especially these lines:
ReplyDelete‘they are all white
and pink with fragrance a streak
of jasmine and rose-almonds’
and
‘i gather dainty blossoms that reek
of rain, promises and silky nights’.
a lovely ode to lilacs and your special week (sending birthday wishes Grace). memorable lines especially
ReplyDelete"i gather dainty blossoms that reek
of rain,"
How lovely, Grace, an oasis of scents, colors, and beauty! I hear it's your birthday about now?! Best wishes to you and a very Happy Birthday!
ReplyDeleteColourful, delightful!
ReplyDeleteHappy Birthday, Grace. How nice to have lilacs celebrate with you.
ReplyDeleteI hope you have or had a lovely birthday week, Grace! I love all the sensory details in this poem.
ReplyDeleteSounds like you had a good birthday! :-) I love these lines:
ReplyDelete"i gather dainty blossoms that reek
of rain, promises and silky nights - "
They felt so French for some reason :-)
Bravo! Nice one.
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping by my blog
Much♡love
Happy birthday, Grace! Good to know you are a fellow Taurean. 🙂
ReplyDeleteYour poem has fragrance and colours of spring. So lovely.
Happy Birthday, Grace and what better way to celebrate than a self-penned poem redolent with lilac fragrance...
ReplyDeleteHappy Birthday and I do love your birthday poem! It skips as you read like you're right there surrounded by colour and fragrant blooms.
ReplyDeleteHappy birthday! This poem is as full of scents, flowers and tastes as all your poetry!
ReplyDeleteBirthday Wishes!!!! I see the flowering lilacs, I smell their sweet fragrance right along with you. Cheers.
ReplyDeleteHappy Birthday, Grace. I love this line from your poem "i gather dainty blossoms that reek of rain" Lilacs are my favorite flower and scent
ReplyDeleteThis is absolutely lyrical and light and lovely and lush.
ReplyDeleteThis is so good, I read it many times to savour it.
ReplyDeleteHi Grace, your magic 9 poem is delightful. I love the imagery. Thank you for the prompt.
ReplyDeleteColourful, gentle, warm..
ReplyDeleteHappy Birthday! Your poem brings the warmth of a spring day. Lilacs are in bloom here and smell heavenly.
ReplyDeleteHi grace - I borrowed some lines from this poem for a Cento challenge at the Pub - https://how-would-you-know.com/2024/05/lament.html
ReplyDelete“i walk on clouds, i write about love
ReplyDeletei gather dainty blossoms that reek
of rain”
I like these lines especially.❤️