i pare a pear
ripe
ate it:
pit, ear, air
i tie a teepee
apart tarp
tar it:
tri-peat pitter patter trap
i err
(reaper)
art ate tea, tree, rare pieta
reel it:
R.I.P.
Posted for dVerse Poets - Anagrammatic Poetry, hosted by Bjorn Rudberg. I have used the letters in my title as words in my poem. Thanks for your visits and comments.
Oh... I like it, great word to use and some nice verses I do like the sound of rain on a tent.
ReplyDeleteWe chose the same word – bit I like yours better than mine! Especially the first stanza and ‘i tie a teepee’.
ReplyDeleteWow!!! Fantastic
ReplyDeleteMuchđź–¤love
Such talent!
ReplyDeleteFor some reason I get a big kick out of "tar it" for your teepee.
ReplyDeleteFun wordplay, Grace.
ReplyDeleteVery creative and love the sounds.
ReplyDeleteI liked the opening I pare a pear...cleverly done...
ReplyDeleteWhat amazes me, having read a fair few of your poems by now, Grace, is that despite the extreme paring down of possibilities which this form dictates, your poetic voice still comes through in this...
ReplyDeleteYES! I second Andrew's comment - this is exactly what I was going to write too, Grace!
DeleteMuch love,
David
SkepticsKaddish.com
Oh this one is incredibly clever! Cheers.
ReplyDeleteWow! You've outdone yourself....so many words used so cleverly here! Loved this!
ReplyDeleteYou've risen to the occasion with this challenge, Grace! Dare we say the pirate has been raised with his own petard?! Bad egg. :)
ReplyDeleteI love the second stanza. A different spin on my pirate imagination. You told a fun tale with this challenge.
ReplyDeleteLove that ending Grace. This has a real beat to it, wonderful reading it - sounds roll.
ReplyDeleteYour post was fantastic! Your ideas are intriguing. Keep up the good work and write more!
ReplyDeleteGreat sounds, Grace!
ReplyDeleteOh pity I missed this one. Awesome play with anagramms, Grace.
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