Monday, January 13, 2020

(again)



you 
are the opaline clouds
salty foam from the roar of the ocean waves
beating my wild moon heart

 and if i have to choose 
you (again)

 i'll embrace your dewdrops
absorb your words as rain
and brush your ash over my singed skin 

Posted for dVerse Poets Pub - Quadrille, hosted by De Jackson.  This is a 44 word post with the chose word, ROAR.   Thanks for the visit. 
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21 comments:

  1. De JacksonJanuary 13, 2020 at 3:10 PM

    Ohhhhhhh, MY. That first stanza. Swooning over that "wild moon heart," as I have one, also.

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  2. brudbergJanuary 13, 2020 at 3:11 PM

    Love the thought of this happening again... like waves coming back over and over.

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  3. Gillena CoxJanuary 13, 2020 at 3:12 PM

    A second chance, nicely penned
    Happy Monday

    Much✏love

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  4. Kim M. RussellJanuary 13, 2020 at 3:23 PM

    I love the echo of ‘(again)’ in the title and the poem, Grace, and the romantic beauty in ‘beating my wild moon heart’. I especially enjoyed the final stanza.

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  5. lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comJanuary 13, 2020 at 3:45 PM

    Love the title in parenthesis....almost like a voice within the parameters of a mountain canyon, shouting out the word....and then it echoes exactly the same back at the reader within the body of the poem. The parentheses make it really seem like an echo. And to use the word "again" which is what an echo does...well done!
    Plus romance too!

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  6. AnotherFearlessYear.netJanuary 13, 2020 at 3:50 PM

    Simply lovely.

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  7. Jade LiJanuary 13, 2020 at 3:51 PM

    there is a global feel to your poem even in its intimacy. you're taking all in, through time. profound poem

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  8. Linda Lee LybergJanuary 13, 2020 at 4:22 PM

    Simply gorgeous Grace.

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  9. indybevJanuary 13, 2020 at 5:14 PM

    Oh to love (again)! This is beautifully written.

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  10. Pat HattJanuary 13, 2020 at 5:19 PM

    A return again and again. Can't be beat.

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  11. Frank HubenyJanuary 13, 2020 at 6:03 PM

    I like the description of words as rain to be absorbed.

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  12. Sabio LantzJanuary 13, 2020 at 6:25 PM

    cool

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  13. TruedessaJanuary 13, 2020 at 6:38 PM

    I do love the wild moon heart, I think I have one of those, as well. I finally saw the moon this morning on my way to work.(sigh) It had been hiding for the last two nights.

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  14. Pat RJanuary 13, 2020 at 6:50 PM

    Aah! The only thing that can make you crazy, yet you'd do it all over again. Fitting title.

    Pat

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  15. Arcadia MariaJanuary 13, 2020 at 7:40 PM

    Nicely done.

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  16. AliJanuary 13, 2020 at 9:03 PM

    I just love, "absorb your words as rain"
    Nice!

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  17. Reena SaxenaJanuary 14, 2020 at 12:45 AM

    Mind-blowing last stanza!

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  18. qbitJanuary 15, 2020 at 3:27 PM

    Nice!

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  19. Merril D. SmithJanuary 20, 2020 at 9:18 AM

    Oh my! I love everything about this poem!
    This may be my favorite of yours.

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  20. Sherry Blue SkyJanuary 20, 2020 at 3:08 PM

    I love "beating my wild moon heart".

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  21. the walking manJanuary 21, 2020 at 5:59 AM

    Grace you are wonderful. I found a mild eroticism in this writing and am glad for it!

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