Monday, April 8, 2019

spring serenade


You are
space between words
breath in necklace of blooms
glowing light as sky purples the night

If I (can) trace
your voice
would it be found in morning birdsong
or
hoots by owl under arching willow tree
or 
joyful echoes of wind serenades 





Picture by Grace@Everyday Amazing



Posted for dVerse Poets Pub - Quadrille hosted by De Jackson.  This is a 44 word post with the chosen word ACE.   Join us when the pub door opens at 3pm EST.  Thanks for the visit.

19 comments:

  1. A sweet song of Spring. You had me at /breath in necklace of blooms/. Clever use of trace/ace too.

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  2. Hi, Grace. I am having trouble with blogspot blogs already today, but hoping this goes through.
    LOVE:
    “breath in necklace of blooms”
    and “purples” as verb. Spectacular.

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  3. Space between words grabbed me... I had considered a similar angle, but your well-crafted work has compelled me to start from scratch.

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  4. Oh this is precious an unanswerable. Luv it
    happy Monday

    much love...

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  5. Very clever. It took me a few times to see it. I love all your words!

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  6. Your aces were well hidden in your lovely breath of spring!

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  7. Once again, Grace, you've seemingly effortlessly given us a beautiful picture of the world around you.

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  8. Loved, "sky purples the night." Such a lovely image!

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  9. This is gorgeous Grace, really captivating - wonderful!

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  10. love all the lines ...gorgeous!!

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  11. Fresh, like spring! I love this: "If I (can) trace
    your voice would it be found in morning birdsong..."

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  12. Beautiful. And I love how you hid your aces.

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  13. A very pretty poem... just close the eyes and imagine

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  14. I love this...especially the last line.

    Pat

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  15. Read this a number of times, beautiful poem, like the rhythm!

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  16. For a change, I'm able to post a comment on blogspot. Hurrah! I love this, and in particular those first few lines. The space between words -- magic.

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  17. I love the space between words. Tr(ace)ing that wonderfully!

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