Tuesday, July 24, 2018

Forget-me-flowers



We chat over tea and maple biscuits 
as carnations & lilies deck the minutes
Your lips are red petals, fawning  
While my feet are wings, flitting 
happily as moths amongst tulips  
You pin a white clover into your hair
And tuck blue violets on your wrists 
Overhead, deadly nettle stings my neck
Igniting inside me, darkness, growing fire
Of barberry and yew - I'm sorry I can't offer you
the sweetness of roses, light of sunflowers
Here, take back all the flowers

And forget me, as I disappear, a scud
in the sadness of half-moon, shriveling bud





Posted for dVerse Poets Pub - Poetics - The Language of Flowers, hosted by Sarah Connors.  You can check for more information of the flowers and their meaning here.
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16 comments:

  1. Oh I love this "not happy end"... there are so many cases where the flowers can be overwhelming, and there are nettles and thorns everywhere.

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  2. in Sarah's poem the subject is drinking coffee while in yours it's tea and maple biscuits! I think some of us enjoy cafe society. Yours is a colourful bouquet, Grace, on the surface quite traditional but with the underlying sting of nettles. I love the rhyming couplet.

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  3. Those nettles can sure sting indeed. The tea is supposed to be good for you though.

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  4. I like the ending phrase "shriveling bud" tying back to the title.

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  5. I love your sweet scented bouquet, and then the sudden pain and bitterness. It's beautifully constructed, and captures the contrasts in flower meanings very well. The title is great - I love the word play. Thanks for sharing.

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  6. At least the narrator was honest. Better the pain now than later. Love your bouquet!

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  7. A brave and beautiful response to the prompt, and like my poem, it takes a code book to fully plum the depths of it. The twist ending, haiku-like, is killer.

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  8. I like the contrast between the beauty of the flowers and the pain of them as well!

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  9. Love those final two lines!

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  10. I wondered where you were taking this and then you suddenly bombed out!! Well done. You were a dud scud in this one!!

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  11. Grace, you always write such fetchingly tender poems. Lady Nyo (Jane)

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  12. "Here, take back all the flowers"... sounds like someone's allergic ;)

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  13. This interplay of flowers is delightful - the distinction between the ones wielded by the two subjects here and the corresponding end makes it worthwhile in a way. The sadness is sometimes better than a mismatched pollen exchange. HA!
    But that last image of a half-moon like bud is heart touching.
    -HA

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  14. Oh the way you played with those petals and their meanings! Love this!

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  15. I like the contrasting emotions and intents that you painted with flowers here. Gorgeous writing as always, Grace. :-)

    Imelda

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  16. Such a prim and proper beginning, sipping tea and munching biscuits. And then we have a bouquet of words :) And finally, those last three lines -- shriveled hopes. Oh my.

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