Tuesday, May 2, 2017
Beyond the pearls & blur-
he gives her a bouquet of red roses
one dozen in full bloom, she presses her nose
for sweet perfume, as she sits on her quilt
but what tingles her spine as she inhales - guilt
she starts to undress, scattering red petals
amidst their bed as passion pours & settles
like rainclouds, his lips shouting love, my love!
but in her mind, she heard get rid of!
his lies taunt her, like poisoned white wine
songs & gifts that he gave someone else- brine
she can taste it - enough of this deception, no more!
she'll snare him first, as she grabs roses from floor
madness came on thorns of the red roses
... striking, hitting, carving- as he discloses
feathery promises until his blood stains white
sheets so bright, in the grim of midnight
here's a solitary rose in bloodied hands
the room's a river of black purple sands
she gets what she wants -beyond the pearls & blur
a perfect offering: his heart only for her-
For D'verse Poets Pub - Dramatic Monologues hosted by Kim M. Russell ~ Thanks for the visit ~
This is an old poem I wrote back in 2011, which I have revised to have a rhyming couplet ~
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Whoa, Grace, a tale of passion and revenge. The last line is chilling!!!
ReplyDeleteI love what you did with the rhyme. A very intriguing piece. 'madness came on thorns of the red roses': strikes a powerful, ominous chord, to what follows. Fantastic writing!
ReplyDeleteOh my lord, that ending! Whew! That was gratifying to read. You do sinister surprisingly well, Grace. :)
ReplyDeleteWhooooo. I can see this:
ReplyDelete"here's a solitary rose in bloodied hands"
Yeeesh. So well done.
Oh Grace, your poem zings with red! I love the guilt undertone throughout and then the bloody ending! I love the way you convey the frenzy in the lines:
ReplyDelete'madness came on thorns of the red roses
... striking, hitting, carving- as he discloses
feathery promises until his blood stains white
sheets so bright, in the grim of midnight'
Oh the rage of those roses... what a way to use the thorns to make have him for herself.
ReplyDeleteNever scorn a woman, words to live by if you want your heart to keep beating lol
ReplyDeleteSounds good!
ReplyDeleteHave a nice week!
Gil Zetbase
Nice one! I especially like 'the room's a river of black purple sands' luscious!
ReplyDeleteNice surprise ending. That is one way to keep a heart only for oneself.
ReplyDeleteA dark tale indeed!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the tale ...would be great for Halloween!
ReplyDeleteSlasher rose in my mind...very scary.
ReplyDeleteGreat pacing - pulls you through!
ReplyDeleteOh, a dangerous tale. I love it. Very well done, Grace. Have a wonderful week.
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Elsie Amata
A horror so real, it is left to our imagination. Bravo!
ReplyDeleteWow! That ending really knocked me out. Wonderful images.
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