Friday, May 25, 2012

Joy



pink petals
cleaving fragrant drops,  
joys of spring 

~0~0

music sheet
full of heart shaped notes, 
song of joy 

~0~0

wrapped in pink, 
she swivels and turns, 
mother's gem 



Commentary:   I was specially touched by Tarun's haiku for me ~ Thank you

Calm like a mother
you taught me this enchanting art
my haiku mother.

(I dedicate this haiku to you Grace for you have taught me and at times corrected my haiku. I have never seen you but I know that we have a heart-to-heart bond like a mother and son.)

Posted for Haiku Heights and Haiku My Heart 


Picture credit:   Reena of Missing moments 
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32 comments:

  1. Janet MartinMay 25, 2012 at 7:44 PM

    Gorgeous! I have a special spot for Bleeding Hearts..they've been a favorite since I was a wee girl!

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  2. LenoraMay 25, 2012 at 8:22 PM

    and i - our fence is filled with their pink joy and yes i hear music!

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  3. Pat HattMay 25, 2012 at 8:34 PM

    Joy indeed just from the simple things, nicely written.

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  4. anthonynorthMay 26, 2012 at 3:28 AM

    Beautifully done - especially the second one.

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  5. Dave KingMay 26, 2012 at 6:50 AM

    Lovely use of the haiku. Quite original. I agree with Anthony - especially the second one.

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  6. Brian MillerMay 26, 2012 at 7:44 AM

    smiles..the middle one made me smile, kinda playful...and romantic

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  7. Magical Mystical TeacherMay 26, 2012 at 7:55 AM

    You've explored joy from several perspectives. I think the sheet music is my favorite.

    Cultivating Joy

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  8. carol l mckennaMay 26, 2012 at 8:20 AM

    Wonderful crafted haiku ~ my favorite is 'mother's gem' ~ have a wonderful weekend ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  9. kaykualaMay 26, 2012 at 8:40 AM

    Great haiku,Grace! To be able to create great haiku from ordinary things is just amazing!

    Hank

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  10. NAWALMay 26, 2012 at 8:53 AM

    amazing :) the last one is soooo amazing! loved it!

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  11. Tarang SinhaMay 26, 2012 at 10:12 AM

    This is really beautiful Grace! Second one is my favorite:)

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  12. AnonymousMay 26, 2012 at 10:36 AM

    joy, indeed!

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  13. HazelMay 26, 2012 at 10:42 AM

    Beautiful all. The second one is a heart-stealer; makes me want to run to the piano and play Cavatina.

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  14. Tarun MazumdarMay 26, 2012 at 11:42 AM

    what a splendid set Grace... you are amazing...

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    1. GraceMay 26, 2012 at 8:45 PM

      Thank you for the lovely haiku dedication ~

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  15. TigerbriteMay 26, 2012 at 11:52 AM

    Simply beautiful.

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  16. Vinay Leo R.May 26, 2012 at 1:11 PM

    Each, a beautiful creation and exuding joy profoundly. I admire your haiku, Grace.

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  17. peggy gattoMay 26, 2012 at 1:45 PM

    Nature does it again!!!

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  18. joanneMay 26, 2012 at 2:12 PM

    Absolutely lovely set....and who doesn't love bleeding hearts!?

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  19. DEZMONDMay 26, 2012 at 2:21 PM

    very pinkilicious...

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  20. AnonymousMay 26, 2012 at 2:23 PM

    Just what my heart needed ... it brings a smile to my spirit. :) Lovely, lovely, lovely, Grace!! Have fun on your continued tour!!!

    Joyous Heart

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  21. RachelMay 26, 2012 at 2:45 PM

    Bleeding hearts are one of my favorites, such a pretty little flower and they do look like a line of music notes, great insight and lovely haiku!

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  22. zongrikMay 26, 2012 at 8:06 PM

    i like the middle one a lot

    valued benevolence haiku

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  23. rebeccaMay 27, 2012 at 12:45 AM

    dear grace,
    h how i love bleeding hearts, delicate and encouraging with their dancing joy. your haiku are especially beautiful as are you. thank you for being an endearing part of haiku my heart.

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  24. Sri ValliMay 27, 2012 at 4:55 AM

    Very beautiful set....Would like to play with those fragrant drops...
    Beautiful dedication from Tarun :)

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  25. PranitaMay 27, 2012 at 5:51 AM

    You set of haiku today r very very pleasing to my eye.. a beautiful picture it paints..! :)

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  26. ChèvrefeuilleMay 27, 2012 at 5:54 AM

    Very well done, nice haiku to read and a joy to re-read.

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  27. ireneMay 27, 2012 at 8:44 PM

    lovely, lilting poems. i am particularly fond of heart shaped notes.

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  28. Jaideep RaoMay 28, 2012 at 12:32 PM

    like and love both of them!, HH feels like a family Grace :)

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  29. Ramesh SoodMay 30, 2012 at 12:50 AM

    Second one made me sing with joy...what a lovely haiku..wow..

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  30. Anu ~*~May 31, 2012 at 11:53 AM

    NO words .. its simply amazing ..

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  31. NehaJune 1, 2012 at 12:20 PM

    Lovely Haiku :)

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