Thursday, December 1, 2022

an infinity of endings

 

you....   get roller coaster nightmares

(&) mutiny of blues & fire storm

-perfect for star-gazing-

for this gnarled gardener's hands

you...... forget - life is now - leaps into

empyrean of sunlight on fading grass

with the eyes of a child -

i inhale.... sweetness of soap & sunshine

of solitude 

Sunday is <lost> in books & clouds, forgetting time & Monday

i sink.... into blur lake bottom

you and i mirror yesterday>>>> in a swoop



Posted for dVerse Poets Pub - MTB - In my end is my beginning, hosted by Laura Bloomsbury.   I have taken the endings of my poems for the last months, and rewritten them into a new poem.

22 comments:

  1. I love how you went from that roller-coaster to being lost in books & clouds

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  2. This is absolutely stunning, Grace! I especially love; "with the eyes of a child - i inhale.... sweetness of soap & sunshine." 😍😍

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  3. it works so well Grace - especially the way that centre
    "leaps into

    empyrean of sunlight on fading grass

    with the eyes of a child -"

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  4. "i sink.... into blur lake bottom"

    I love that.

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  5. I LOVE how the lines fit together after "leaps"!

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  6. I'm in strong agreement w/ Shawna on the lake bottom image

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  7. There's a back and forth of 'you' and 'I' which gives it cohesion. The images are all separate, but they fit into a whole.

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  8. I am so impressed with how you made a perfect poem from those twelve lines, Grace!

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  9. - life is now - leaps into empyrean of sunlight on fading grass with the eyes of a child - loved it Grace. πŸ™‚✌πŸΌπŸ•Š❣️

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  10. Nicely done, Grace. Sounds like Monday's are blue for you!

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  11. I could definitely read your endings for an infinity! Mesmerized! πŸ‘πŸ‘

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  12. This poem seriously does swoop us along with its undulating flow... it is exciting! How fun.

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  13. I like the way this rolls and flows, like the water. Lovely images connected by "the speaker's" you and I.

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  14. Grace, this has beautiful back and forth and the lines flow into each other with nary a bump. Lovely.

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  15. Great spiraling rhythm. Like a dance.

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  16. Feels so feather light and weightless. It was also nice to recognize some of your beautiful lines, Grace.

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  17. I like the perspective of looking back on special Sunday from mundane Monday :)

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  18. I'm in thrall to how these lines track time, starting points of sun and stars, from outdoor garden to indoor soap, and Sunday's books. Love the "swoop" of the last line, and this mid-point of the underpinning it all: "empyrean of sunlight on fading grass"!

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