Saturday, October 29, 2011

Ghostly



pale like a ghost 
she screamed so loudly until
white sheet fell away


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ghostly encounters
real or imagined scenes
gives me frightful dreams


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unsociable, shy  
she was a ghost of herself
living in the past





Posted for Haiku Heights :  Prompt # 92 is Ghosts.   Poetry form:   3 lines of 5-7-5 syllables


Happy Halloween ~

picture credit:   http://lovemedicine.tumblr.com/#7

13 comments:

  1. Three very different treatments but all good, especially the last.

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  2. Nicely done all three!! The last one is sad!

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  3. ghost of herself, one of best line..

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  4. Great set, from different aspects ... bravo!

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  5. I like it that you have taken three different angles for these.

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  6. Each one a different look at ghost...the third one is my favorite

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  7. Three interesting versions of ghost connections! Delightful!

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  8. I especially like the first one...delightfully creepy! Great job on all three!

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  9. great imagery

    my entry http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2011/10/29/four-ghost-senryu/

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  10. I think a white sheet, might just scare me too!

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  11. love this,

    thoughtful and creepy expressions.

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  12. The last one seems to describe Miss Havisham in Dickens' "Great Expectations."



    Ghosts of Trees

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