russet leaves peek
at old wooden barn
seams bursting with
harvest of corn and wheat,
summer's hay stacked high
long slender arms twirl
the cool winds whispering
coppery meadow, until
dust brown leaves sleep,
falling into arms of mother earth
Posted for Imaginary Garden with Real Toads: Friday Picture Prompt
"falling into arms of mother earth" is so wonderful, and "coppery meadow" is so beautifully descriptive.
ReplyDelete(Just thought I should mention, though, you might mean "peek" rather than "peak" in the first line?)
Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie’s Guide to Adventurous Travel
Beautiful imagery here, especially the colors like "coppery meadow" and "dust brown leaves"!
ReplyDeleteyour words colorful...beautiful imagery...
ReplyDeleteThis is just beautiful - such an excellent word choice to capture the mood of the pic. I especially like 'coppery meadow'.
ReplyDeletebeautiful choice of image and colours.lovely description.
ReplyDeleteVery real depiction of the goodness of Autumn in colors and description!
ReplyDeleteHank
Thanks for the wonderful comments.
ReplyDeleteYes, Kay, I meant peek :-)
Wonderful painting of the rich colors of fall...I enjoyed this very much.
ReplyDeletelove your autumn poem, charming imagery,
ReplyDeletewelcome sharing a piece of your talent with us today.
smiles.
nice imagery
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