Friday, November 16, 2012

Tree



red maple tree
with leaves fiery and shaped of tears,  
silently she mourns  

~0~0~

pine tree 
coated with ivory and midnight moon,  
restless is her sleep

~0~0~

cherry blooms 
on a parasol of forest green -
spring in her step

~0~0~

willow tree
bowing in a dance courtyard - 
boldly she leaps   



46 comments:

  1. Great image and you sure brought it to life as it danced away. Have a great weekend too at your zoo!

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  2. Oooo i love thhe pine tree, restless and adorned
    But they all were lovely
    Happy weekend, Grace

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  3. Lovely tree haiku, Grace. So much is bare here now...most everything, in fact.
    Enjoy your weekend.

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  4. I enjoyed the images in each verse especially the last 'bowing in a dance courtyard.'
    Well done.

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  5. Ah tree
    image and words
    fantastic

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  6. Oh my -- these are lovely. I especially loved "a parasol of forest green."

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  7. Such nice colors in these haiku and covers all the seasons. :)

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  8. i def like the cherry blossom, spring in her step one...that is really cool...smiles...love the bowing one at the end too....nice to see you writing again ma'am...smiles..

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  9. i love the pine tree haiku...

    Ta Tarun

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  10. what lovely and beautiful red maple tree!!

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  11. Grace, you have captured the magic of an arboretum here.

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  12. It`s fantastic, Grace !!!

    Have a wonderful weekend :)
    groayla

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  13. Gorgeous word-play and the use of imagery. Loved it. :)

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  14. on a parasol of forest green -- what a delightful image!

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  15. Each one a gem..I liked them all..

    RS:)

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  16. I simply adore these haiku as I have such a reverence for trees. Just beautiful, every one.

    Peace

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  17. You have personified the trees so well .. awesome !!!

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  18. wow! love the photo ~ is it a creation you made? It is beautiful ~ lovely set of haiku all with wonderful messages ~ (A Creative Harbor ^_^)

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    1. Thank you but the picture is not mine ~

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    2. This looks like the energy artist, Julia Watkins! She does lovely work, and this goes so well with your repertoire of Haiku, Grace!!

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  19. These are all gorgeous.Like a series of dancers.

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  20. Really like all of these, especially the first one.

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  21. Truly, the trees are mourning...for their mother....earth.

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  22. very visual, nature in all its glory.....enjoyed all the haiku !

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  23. I love this image! Interesting how she starts out mourning as a maple and then she's dancing as a willow. Makes me ponder how we as humans can hold many emotions simultaneously; grief/joy/fear/courage.
    Enjoy your weekend Grace!

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  24. Nice set of trees, very dreamy:) The illustration is perfect:)

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  25. Really lovely personification...nicely done...

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  26. I agree with Laundry,
    The personification was perfect.

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  27. a stunning poetic-arboricultural excursion

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  28. Four graceful haiku about different trees and their relationship with a woman. Very well written.
    Thanks for your visit; I am happy you enjoyed the video of our 5th Anniversary.
    Enjoy Sunday.
    :)

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  29. Tremendous! Each one of them. Simply tremendous.

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  30. Very beautiful
    Picture matches the beauty
    A perfect medley

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  31. I love this, imagining myself float into your world of trees..

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  32. I liked cherry blooms one! spring in her steps, loved it!

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  33. How beautifully you've defined 4 trees! Wonderful!
    And the picture you've is so beautiful!

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  34. Your haiku are a beautiful serenade to the trees.

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  35. Wonderful set, Grace. Beautifully crafted

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  36. I thought the cherry blooms one was perfect.

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  37. A whole forest! Nicely written Grace.

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  38. I loved this. The continuation and the emotions felt through trees... just wow!

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  39. Love how you saw each tree with a different personality. I'll have to look more closely at the trees I pass in my day!

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