Tuesday, September 30, 2025

Credit River

 

the river's mouth is wide open 

gently pulsing tides under autumn's

foliage of maple and oak trees


along trail ways auburn & chestnut

fallen leaves, we go

downwards, downwards


listening to shrills of wood peckers 

and birdsongs from the robins &

Blue Jays, riotous beavers & frogs


leaping, leaping

along with salmon and trout

swimming from rocky broad bend


to marsh of cattails, weeds & grass

peak season is here

our fishing rods & paddles


swirling, swirling

to catch the harvest of the season

from this land we call home



Posted for dVerse Poets Pub - Dipping our Poetic Paddles, with guest host, Truedessa.  Thanks for visiting and commenting.


3 comments:

  1. This sounds like a paradise to me... though I think you may have ignored the mosquitoes and gnats

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  2. I really enjoyed your river journey. It was full of life and sounds. I especially liked this line.

    leaping, leaping
    along with salmon and trout

    I can see the salmon jumping out of the river. Thank you for taking me with you on this adventure.

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  3. Oh Grace, this is a wonderful poem, from the wide open river’s mouth (I wonder if she’s inhaling, exhaling, or exclaiming), along the trail ways, right on to the marsh of cattails, weeds & grass. I love all the colours and repetition of ‘downwards, downwards’, ‘leaping, leaping’ and ‘swirling, swirling’, which creates rhythm.

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