the ashen sky is falling
land exhales fumes and smoke
shadows widen, rehearsing
what comes next -
or so it seems
in the rearview mirror
my hands, empty bowls
my body, battlefield
storm-tested terrain
my feet, sore from stone-shard ground
or so it seems
in the rearview mirror
but here, right now
winter sun holds
bare maples stand, listening
snow hushes what survives
i am here, attending
not to the dimming of borrowed lights,
but to the spark i carry-
fire struck from pen and paper,
time marked without
vines of regret
let us spring
toward the pale tree
where brightness still gathers
Inspired by: Extinction of Useless Lights
by Yves Tanguy
Posted for dVerse Poets Pub - OpenLinkNight, our last one for the year 2025. Thank you for all your visits and comments. See you in January 5, 2026.

This is gorgeously rendered, Grace. I especially admire this part; "but here, right now winter sun holds bare maples stand, listening
ReplyDeletesnow hushes what survives." ❤️❤️
I do love the way we may use our pens... I imagine us all using poetry as beacons and torches...
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your borrowed lights, Grace, the shift from ashen sky to fumes and smoke, the view though a rearview mirror, to winter sun, the hush of snow, the ;fire struck from pen and paper’, and the ‘pale tree where brightness still gathers’. I feel our poems have met somewhere in between.
ReplyDelete"the spark I carry" Yes! This is wonderful, Grace.
ReplyDeleteI too tended the inner light. Loved the rhythm of your poem.
ReplyDeleteLovely and hopeful, Grace. I especially like the second and third stanzas. Merry Christmas to you and your family~
ReplyDeleteI love the push and pull tension between jeopardy and peace here, Grace. And these lines especially:
ReplyDelete"my hands, empty bowls
my body, battlefield
storm-tested terrain"
I like your spark of hope at the end of your poem, Grace.
ReplyDeleteGrace, a lovely poem that highlighted what the art said to me ... I also enjoyed how you used "or so it seems" ... clever. Wishing you all things good in 2026!
ReplyDeletelove that last stanza with the pun : )
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and inspiring Grace 💕
ReplyDeletePositivity and optimism with Christmas cheer!
ReplyDeleteLet there be light and may all appreciate the brightness every day & year!