the ashen sky is falling
land exhales fumes and smoke
shadows widen, rehearsing
what comes next -
or so it seems
in the rearview mirror
my hands, empty bowls
my body, battlefield
storm-tested terrain
my feet, sore from stone-shard ground
or so it seems
in the rearview mirror
but here, right now
winter sun holds
bare maples stand, listening
snow hushes what survives
i am here, attending
not to the dimming of borrowed lights,
but to the spark i carry-
fire struck from pen and paper,
time marked without
vines of regret
let us spring
toward the pale tree
where brightness still gathers
Inspired by: Extinction of Useless Lights
by Yves Tanguy
Posted for dVerse Poets Pub - OpenLinkNight, our last one for the year 2025. Thank you for all your visits and comments. See you in January 5, 2026.

This is gorgeously rendered, Grace. I especially admire this part; "but here, right now winter sun holds bare maples stand, listening
ReplyDeletesnow hushes what survives." ❤️❤️
I do love the way we may use our pens... I imagine us all using poetry as beacons and torches...
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your borrowed lights, Grace, the shift from ashen sky to fumes and smoke, the view though a rearview mirror, to winter sun, the hush of snow, the ;fire struck from pen and paper’, and the ‘pale tree where brightness still gathers’. I feel our poems have met somewhere in between.
ReplyDelete"the spark I carry" Yes! This is wonderful, Grace.
ReplyDeleteI too tended the inner light. Loved the rhythm of your poem.
ReplyDeleteLovely and hopeful, Grace. I especially like the second and third stanzas. Merry Christmas to you and your family~
ReplyDeleteI love the push and pull tension between jeopardy and peace here, Grace. And these lines especially:
ReplyDelete"my hands, empty bowls
my body, battlefield
storm-tested terrain"
I like your spark of hope at the end of your poem, Grace.
ReplyDeleteGrace, a lovely poem that highlighted what the art said to me ... I also enjoyed how you used "or so it seems" ... clever. Wishing you all things good in 2026!
ReplyDeletelove that last stanza with the pun : )
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and inspiring Grace 💕
ReplyDeletePositivity and optimism with Christmas cheer!
ReplyDeleteLet there be light and may all appreciate the brightness every day & year!
I like the positive movement of your poem--away from the rear view and storms to attending the spark you carry. 💙
ReplyDelete"but to the spark i carry-
ReplyDeletefire struck from pen and paper,
time marked without
vines of regret" so positive and forward looking. Love your closing stanza too, Grace.
Great poem. Well written.
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful, Grace. I love the movement from ashen skies to the gathering brightness.
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