Thursday, December 18, 2025

borrowed lights

 

the ashen sky is falling

land exhales fumes and smoke

shadows widen, rehearsing

what comes next -

or so it seems

in the rearview mirror


my hands, empty bowls

my body, battlefield

storm-tested terrain

my feet, sore from stone-shard ground

or so it seems

in the rearview mirror


but here, right now

winter sun holds 

bare maples stand, listening

snow hushes what survives


i am here, attending

not to the dimming of borrowed lights,

but to the spark i carry-

fire struck from pen and paper,

time marked without

vines of regret


let us spring

toward the pale tree

where brightness still gathers



                              Inspired by:   Extinction of Useless Lights

                                             by Yves Tanguy


Posted for dVerse Poets Pub - OpenLinkNight, our last one for the year 2025.  Thank you for all your visits and comments.  See you in January 5, 2026.  

12 comments:

  1. This is gorgeously rendered, Grace. I especially admire this part; "but here, right now winter sun holds bare maples stand, listening
    snow hushes what survives." ❤️❤️

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  2. I do love the way we may use our pens... I imagine us all using poetry as beacons and torches...

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  3. I enjoyed your borrowed lights, Grace, the shift from ashen sky to fumes and smoke, the view though a rearview mirror, to winter sun, the hush of snow, the ;fire struck from pen and paper’, and the ‘pale tree where brightness still gathers’. I feel our poems have met somewhere in between.

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  4. "the spark I carry" Yes! This is wonderful, Grace.

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  5. I too tended the inner light. Loved the rhythm of your poem.

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  6. Lovely and hopeful, Grace. I especially like the second and third stanzas. Merry Christmas to you and your family~

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  7. I love the push and pull tension between jeopardy and peace here, Grace. And these lines especially:

    "my hands, empty bowls
    my body, battlefield
    storm-tested terrain"

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  8. I like your spark of hope at the end of your poem, Grace.

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  9. Grace, a lovely poem that highlighted what the art said to me ... I also enjoyed how you used "or so it seems" ... clever. Wishing you all things good in 2026!

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  10. Beautiful and inspiring Grace 💕

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  11. Positivity and optimism with Christmas cheer!
    Let there be light and may all appreciate the brightness every day & year!

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