Thursday, June 25, 2026

a work in progress


i would find you
between sun-dried flowers
spent, tongue rolled back

from screaming at the top
of your lungs
hoping to get my attention

forgive me
if i am waddling these days
with my head buried
in numbers

i miss seeing you
in colorful shirts & hats
peeking from wherever

your fancy takes you

but when i am alone
in a silent
and reflective mood

you come
unbidden, unchecked, unfiltered

knocking me out
of my city comfort

you are the stealthy driver

of this imaginary car
bringing me drops-

a green spiraled tendril   
a phrase left beside my teacup
a stitch of a fading memory

i gather them
into my pockets 

lined by moon dust

trusting time
that old gardener
to tend what lies unseen
beneath the page

and you
arrive-
ink, insight, the inglorious beat

of something
i knew before
but somehow forgot

you place it here
an open palm
and i am blown away

by the thought
that my <best> poems

are still walking
toward me


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4 comments:

  1. I love that glorious ending... and I agree that is what keeps us writing. Happy upcoming break

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  2. The perfect title for your ars poetica, Grace; we are all works in progress, especially poets. You brought your muse to life, like a reincarnation of van Gogh, ‘between sun-dried flowers’ in ‘colorful shirts & hats’. These lines resonate with me:
    ‘you come
    unbidden, unchecked, unfiltered’
    and
    ‘a green spiraled tendril
    a phrase left beside my teacup
    a stitch of a fading memory’.
    I also love the assonant list of three: ‘ink, insight, the inglorious beat’.

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  3. so evocative Grace - they way the poet addresses the poetry of poetry - those italicised drops like first lines to set the poem in motion

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  4. I'm not sure it can be said any better than what you've written here! Fantastic, my friend. One of your absolute best.

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