i.
spring hides from the window
the fog is a film
in noir
bathed in memories of tulips & blue irises
(no birds in sight)
ii.
gusts & thunderstorms
are the weather
heavy-lidded eyes
peek from sleep delirium & then lapse
(a fallen feather)
iii.
the trees
are sticks & stilts & empty
canvas
awaiting the slight brush of spring
(a bird song trills)
iv.
what spell is this
to wake up with bones fresh & fevered
my fingers are running faster
than i can catch up
sage smoke & songs
from spring rain to sloshing river
(a cardinal on the fence)
This is beautiful, Grace. The line that stood out for me is "bathed in memories of tulips & blue irises" (Should the first iii be ii?)
ReplyDeleteThanks Merril. Updated the post.
DeleteA delightful following the broom, Grace. I love the way it begins with the title ‘morning bird notes’, goes from no birds in sight to a feather and birdsong, and ends with a ‘cardinal on the fence’, all woven into spring weather.
ReplyDeleteThank you. Waiting for spring season here.
DeleteVery peaceful, bucolic. I could hear it.
ReplyDeleteInteresting
ReplyDeleteMuch love
Nicely done, Grace!
ReplyDeleteSo many engaging images - I could really visualise and imagine them jumping off the page - Jae
ReplyDeleteA beautiful portrait of spring, Grace...i love verse iii :)
ReplyDeleteHi Grace, beautiful spring time and great to be back!
ReplyDelete- Hank
Gorgeous! I think you've caught the form beautifully.
ReplyDeletelove the form gives strength to what one sees in a beautiful waiting for spring day... still need a jacket to go outside...
ReplyDeleteA very visual piece. I have missed your creativity. - 😊
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